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Sail Delights

Afloat basin of water Then prevailing over sink To reign above child’s bath tub Before sailing midst ditch swirls… Paper boats brought sheer delight Blown with peace* by God’s sweet breeze Now propel my faith-swept dreams.
*Philippians 4:7 And the peace of God, which passeth all understanding, shall keep your hearts and minds through Christ Jesus. May 16, 2020 4th place, "FINISH LINE IN SEVEN" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud; judged on 5/19/2020

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Date: 5/19/2020 11:32:00 PM
Your words are always full of divinity. Congratulations Beata :)
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Date: 5/16/2020 8:55:00 PM
sweet as can be, Beata.
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Date: 5/16/2020 9:50:00 AM
There is a sweetness to this write...it's in and around the words...I like it
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Date: 5/16/2020 9:32:00 AM
Calming with childhood delight and Godspeed!
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Date: 5/16/2020 7:59:00 AM
what a charming poem Beata i can imagine you having fun making paper boats to entertain your sweet child:-) hugs Jan xx
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