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Sail Away Part Two

He met a woman full of desire

She'd  set his heart on fire

A lonely sailor man

Used to stopping at ports whenever he can

She was his own special treasure

Time with her he could not measure

He asked her to sail the seven seas

Even if he had to get on his knees

Would she come or would she stay

Would she even try to delay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/4/2010 2:20:00 PM
hmmm, seems like you just redid the last one and make it shorter? I am wondering if this tale is going to continue with her decison to join him or not!
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