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Sail Away

Drop in an ocean lost in midnight waves I sink deep

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/15/2010 3:29:00 PM

Thnx for leaving comments on my work, my friend...means a lot to me...Jimmy

James Peranteau

Date: 5/15/2010 7:14:00 AM

This is a "Monoku" Charmaine ! And a beautiful one at that ! Look up Monoku in poetry forms here on the soup ! james

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 5/15/2010 2:22:00 AM

Look to the sky , the stars hold your wishes

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 7:20:00 PM

I have some of those too dear sweet friend Charma.. your word are poetically correct and am still throwing wishes in the ocean every time I am at the beach... maybe one day come true ... lovely Senryu .. luv.. Linda-Marie..