A. Juman Poet Free verse

Said the Shadow

Sorry friends
After it got clobbered I decided to give it to the boss for review.
She said their were too many grammatical mistakes 
and some boo boos.
She fixed and give to my son to OK since I had no permission to put it on
and the inevitable happened. 
He said its going in the book
and I wont be allowed to make any more post.
without permission.
I had only gotten permission for the first two
He said he will consider letting me become a life time member
so I can sponsor contest. (I am also not allowed to respond to anyone comment)
I an in the dog house.
Sorry


Said the shadow
I am always crawling behind you.
I am yours,
no! I am his, hers, theirs.
Did I scare you?
No ---oo!
I just pull the pee out of you.

11/2/2015                     © A. JUman - The said Poet
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Rudolph Rinaldi June 7, 2021 at 2:22 PM I READ A NUMBER OF YOUR POEMS AFTER YOU SENT ME A COMMENT SAYING YOU LIKED ONE OF MINE. I WANTED TO SEE WHAT KIND OF PERSON COULD LIKE ONE OF MY POEMS AND I LOVE YOUR POEMS. SCARY, ISN'T IT ? YOU TRY TO SPEAK TO YOURSELF AND YOU WIND UP SPEAKING TO SOME OTHERS IN YOUR PLACE.

Richard Lamoureux November 12, 2015 at 7:24 AM Congratulations! I enjoyed reading this one. A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 6:44 PM Sorry Sir, my father in not allowed to publish poems or email anyone on this site. If he does I will have my uncle put him on one of the slowest tug in the fleet. Then he will only see land one day a week. It seem he don't like it at home any more.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 11, 2015 at 3:57 PM Congratulations A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 6:45 PM Sorry Miss, my father in not allowed to publish poems or email anyone on this site. If he does I will have my uncle put him on one of the slowest tug in the fleet. Then he will only see land one day a week. It seem he don't like it at home any more. A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 2:08 AM Sorry Nayda - My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Sara Kendrick November 11, 2015 at 2:49 PM Okay!!SK A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 6:46 PM Sorry Miss, my father in not allowed to publish poems or email anyone on this site. If he does I will have my uncle put him on one of the slowest tug in the fleet. Then he will only see land one day a week. It seem he don't like it at home any more. A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 2:09 AM Sorry Sara - My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Skat A November 11, 2015 at 10:53 AM A. Zaladin, Congratulations on your win. SKAT A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 6:46 PM Sorry Miss, my father in not allowed to publish poems or email anyone on this site. If he does I will have my uncle put him on one of the slowest tug in the fleet. Then he will only see land one day a week. It seem he don't like it at home any more. A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 2:09 AM Sorry Skat - My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Pandita Sietesantos November 11, 2015 at 8:52 AM Just swinging back to congratulate you, my friend, on your win! Have a great day! Pandita A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 6:46 PM Sorry Miss, my father in not allowed to publish poems or email anyone on this site. If he does I will have my uncle put him on one of the slowest tug in the fleet. Then he will only see land one day a week. It seem he don't like it at home any more. A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 2:10 AM Sorry Pandita - My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Tammy Reams November 11, 2015 at 8:43 AM Congrats n your win A. Zaladin! Thank you for entering into my contest. A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 6:47 PM Sorry Miss, my father in not allowed to publish poems or email anyone on this site. If he does I will have my uncle put him on one of the slowest tug in the fleet. Then he will only see land one day a week. It seem he don't like it at home any more. A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 2:11 AM Sorry Tammy - My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Pandita Sietesantos November 9, 2015 at 3:18 PM What an exquisite piece, my friend! The imagery is most amazing! Please continue to churn out more of these pieces with the ink from your golden pen! A-7 for sure! Pandita A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 3:36 PM My dear Pandita, I love your name.I feel very shy thanking any one for this poem but sincere thanks. What ever I write I wrote with love from my heart Thanks again from way across the pond

Jill Spagnola November 9, 2015 at 2:34 PM How bout Kudos! I have tried this edgy difficult form, but you pulled it off beautifully!, jill A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 2:49 PM Jill --I feel very shy thanking any one for this poem but sincere thanks. What ever I write I wrote with love from my heart thanks again

Kevin Leake November 9, 2015 at 1:17 PM Extremely good write Zaladin, You have played with those colours really well, and taken it to a new level with wonderful imagery and passion. Best Wishes Kevin A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 1:30 PM Thanks a million Kevin. I am so glad you love it as that is my goal. Do come back to visit.

Hija De La Luna November 9, 2015 at 7:37 AM Impassioned write here, Zaladin! I love the ride as I read through your piece. I love the way how your words play to create such a beautiful poem. A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 8:51 AM Love your name. Hija Thanks a million for stopping by and spending time to read. Thanks again and do drop by again. you are most kind.

Patrycjusz Kopec November 8, 2015 at 12:22 PM Good imagery, good expression like the poem A. Juman November 8, 2015 at 12:41 PM Thanks a million Patryc I really appreciate that

Laura Breidenthal November 7, 2015 at 6:31 PM The capitalized words are very effective for this burning, passionate poem. "Strange sounds made me look down the shimmering black abyss, to see her now puffed prune lips burrowing through the snow."...those are some chilling lines... very interesting work here! Always, Laura A. Juman November 7, 2015 at 7:00 PM Laura thanks --I feel very shy thanking any one for this poem but sincere thanks. What ever I write I wrote with love from my heart

Abdelwaheb Dhaou November 7, 2015 at 5:15 AM Awesome write,pregnant with vivid imagery. I really elated. Bravo ! A. Juman November 7, 2015 at 8:28 AM Thanks a million --Abdelwahe I really do appreciate that very much thanks again I do try my best. Your words gives me more incentive to try harder--I like bravo

Marilyn Williams November 6, 2015 at 10:33 AM I like this much. It tells a lot. A. Juman November 6, 2015 at 11:36 AM Marilyn --thanks a million for giving me your opinion. It gives me encouragement

Constance La France November 5, 2015 at 10:29 PM Hi, I am here to look at your poetry as requested, well the writing is beautiful, I love your descriptions, well done there, however, this is not a Concrete form, a concrete form takes the shape of the thing it is describing, you can look that up on our forms section, what you have here in my opinion is a very pretty free verse, hope this helps, it is important to write in the form you specify especially when entering contests and thanks for visiting my poetry ~ Constance La France November 6, 2015 at 4:16 PM Well concrete is suppose to have a shape like a diamond or box or flower that kind of thing, not all the examples on poetry soup are correct so be careful with that, you can look concrete up on our forms section or google it, but I see you have changed your poem to Free Verse and that makes it a perfect and lovely write ... A. Juman November 6, 2015 at 3:21 AM Can you please tell me what form I can use--really appreciate thanks again A. Juman November 6, 2015 at 3:16 AM Thanks much I do appreciate and will change that but---- I don't really understand concrete because I read one describing cloud and light and they don't have shape ---thanks a lot again really appreciate.

Tasmina Hayat Khan November 5, 2015 at 9:07 PM Well penned work indeed! Lovely lust...he he he... A. Juman November 5, 2015 at 9:28 PM Thank you thank you my dear I appreciate that

Njeri Hunjeri November 5, 2015 at 9:00 PM Wow i like how you played with the colors here to bring such a beautiful write. Very nice! #7 A. Juman November 5, 2015 at 9:01 PM Thanks my dear I appreciate that

Skat A November 5, 2015 at 8:16 PM I like the sound that is pulling you in A. Zaladin... :) WOW... SKAT A. Juman November 5, 2015 at 9:32 PM thanks my dear-- I decided to allow my pen its wicked intent.

Don Johnson November 5, 2015 at 7:11 PM To say convey without the words, of Love n lust unlike the birds , of sweetest paradise... Well done Sultan, A. Juman November 5, 2015 at 7:38 PM thank you for reading --I do appreciate

Al Juman November 2, 2015 at 9:12 PM I had to read it slowly a second time before I got it.---nice detail on love making Excellent poem