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Said the door

Said the door!


The door SAID,
"I am tired.
Every day I get slammed in.
What am I just a piece of wood or metal?
Have I no feelings?
God forbids one of you gets angry,
you'll slam me so hard I fall off my hinges!
Then comes the thieves,
they kick me in!
What a set of rascals!
Most of all I hate those police squads,
they come with these big ugly pile driving things
that send me to smithereens.
Now the only people I will give permission to knock me in are fire fighters.
Them guys are always trying to help someone.
Why can you all be like them,
Help someone.
Matters not it's a bum, 
someone next door who need a ride to the grocery store,
whoever, 
whatever it is, 
don't think twice just do it."
© A. Juman The "said" poet       11/8/2015
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Date: 11/27/2015 9:56:00 PM
This takes to the point of what we should all be doing
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Date: 11/12/2015 1:59:00 AM
smashing work..well done, a.... huggs
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Date: 11/12/2015 2:05:00 AM
Sorry Nette My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry
Date: 11/11/2015 10:14:00 AM
This is a well written, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. Your word choices and simplistic delivery make this a very interesting and thoughtful read. Emile.
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:40:00 AM
Thank you my friend
Date: 11/11/2015 9:37:00 AM
Mental talk by the matter. A unique thought loved reading it
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:41:00 AM
Thank you my friend
Date: 11/11/2015 3:41:00 AM
Nicely written brother ,,one needs to be true and not egoistic so that the doors of hate and boredom will be closed for ever#LOved it all from beginning to end
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Date: 11/11/2015 5:27:00 AM
Kamran Thank you much my brother. I really appreciate it. for your kind words and please do look us up again you are most kind--Million of thanks here
Date: 11/11/2015 12:13:00 AM
Your write is so true my friend, if this could be done we would all be much better in this world. A very great and excellent piece..........A.M.
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Date: 11/11/2015 5:28:00 AM
Afo---Thank you much my brother. I really appreciate it. for your kind words and please do look us up again you are most kind--Million of thanks here
Date: 11/10/2015 2:47:00 PM
Very observant, and we should also recognize that doors open and close when we call them opportunity, hopefully they do not close too soon. It is always nice to give freinds and neighbors a hand, I carry some down to the Acme grocery store or Dunkin donuts when I see them walking in that direction. Lots of people in my neighborhood neither drive nor have anyone in the family who drives. so I keep an eye out for them.
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:59:00 PM
Vee--Thank you my friend you are most kind it is the human thing to do. never know when we ourselves be in a circumstance of need. thanks again
Date: 11/10/2015 2:06:00 PM
Wow great poem,people should start noticingthe value of a simple thing like a door.
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Date: 11/10/2015 3:03:00 PM
Boipelo-- thank you my friend --do let the door speak to you the messages are plenty. Come back to see us next week their will be another.
Date: 11/10/2015 7:22:00 AM
If we thought all things have some form of feelings then we would better people be! Delightful poem with a clear message. Enjoyed it, dear A. Zaladin!
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Date: 11/10/2015 7:37:00 AM
Demetrios ---Thanks a million for stopping by and spending time to read. Thanks again and do drop by again. I do practice the message everyday. They come to my gate Monday thru Thursday for a plate
Date: 11/10/2015 4:41:00 AM
great poem there Zaladin, never thought the door felt all that pain. thanks for letting us realize that.
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Date: 11/10/2015 4:47:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by James. I really appreciate that you are a true friend---Glad you like it----Anything that brings out the best in us. I have one in the works for next week
Date: 11/9/2015 2:29:00 PM
Zaladin, I really love random acts of kindness as well. Hopefully it will strengthen mine and others' karma from the many doors in my life that you have personified. Great write, jill
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Date: 11/9/2015 2:46:00 PM
Jill thanks for stopping by I really do appreciate--Thanks a billion and glad I can inspire someone thanks again
Date: 11/9/2015 1:04:00 PM
Excellent write reminds me if a door that never closes to the heart.
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Date: 11/9/2015 1:28:00 PM
I really appreciate that Terry thanks a million and do come back to visit.
Date: 11/9/2015 11:01:00 AM
I like this view A Zaladin. So much a door sees, yet I like the one thing expressed. SKAT
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Date: 11/9/2015 12:05:00 PM
Thank you my dear-- Glad you enjoyed as that is indeed my goal
Date: 11/9/2015 8:12:00 AM
Well composed. Good to read. Best wishes. Anisha D
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:46:00 AM
Anisha --Love your name. Thanks a million for stopping by and spending time to read. Thanks again and do drop by again
Date: 11/9/2015 7:57:00 AM
This is clever and entertaining.
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:45:00 AM
Richard thanks for all the time you spend thanks my friend
Date: 11/9/2015 6:37:00 AM
good personification!!! =`)!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:44:00 AM
Oliver, thanks a million I do appreciate you kindness stopping by
Date: 11/9/2015 3:59:00 AM
wonderful poem,i enjoyed reading
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Date: 11/9/2015 4:18:00 AM
Thank you Ananthasa I am really glad you like it. I appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 11/9/2015 2:22:00 AM
I loved it A. Zaladin! Nice personification! I enjoyed it TFS
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Date: 11/9/2015 2:27:00 AM
Thank you Lei My reply got mixed up but I really do appreciate that--Thanks a million do come back
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Date: 11/9/2015 2:24:00 AM
Thank you Uriel very happy you like it Thanks a million my friend for the visit do come back
Date: 11/9/2015 2:02:00 AM
This is Ingenius Zaladin gave me some ideas keep up your art
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Date: 11/9/2015 2:25:00 AM
Thank you Uriel very happy you like it Thanks a million my friend for the visit do come back
Date: 11/8/2015 7:19:00 PM
Good write Zaladin, can't knock that poetry. Pete Yuhas
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Date: 11/8/2015 7:35:00 PM
Pete you are most kind with your words to me Thank you my dear friend
Date: 11/8/2015 4:49:00 PM
Dear Zaladin Interesting write love the idea about telling your story from the doors point of view, you've expressed this very well, very modern subject matter nice write, thank you for inviting me to come by and read your work, I'll read another and review, cheri and thank you also for your review of mine, I'm truly flattered, take care
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Date: 11/8/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Cheri --Your word of encouragement keeps my mind tumbling to do better. Thanks a million.
Date: 11/8/2015 4:25:00 PM
Dear A. Zaladin: Nice write. Nice read. Enjoyed. Leon
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Date: 11/8/2015 4:33:00 PM
Thank you Leon--I appreciate you positive comment
Date: 11/8/2015 4:05:00 PM
Many thoughts hinged on that door. Lovely personification
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Date: 11/8/2015 4:11:00 PM
Many, many thanks Tim you give me confidence
Date: 11/8/2015 3:30:00 PM
I love your personification of a door so creative and well done
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Date: 11/8/2015 4:00:00 PM
Thanks my dear you have just made my day thank you
Date: 11/8/2015 11:28:00 AM
Lovely write, I enjoyed it, please do keep writing and sharing more of your works :) XoXo Anoucheka
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Date: 11/8/2015 11:59:00 AM
Anoucheka---Ouch that a nice name. Make me want to fall in love again. LOL -----I really appreciate that my dear and I will try my best to keep on writing
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