A. Juman Poet Personification

Said the Door

Said the door!


The door SAID,
"I am tired.
Every day I get slammed in.
What am I just a piece of wood or metal?
Have I no feelings?
God forbids one of you gets angry,
you'll slam me so hard I fall off my hinges!
Then comes the thieves,
they kick me in!
What a set of rascals!
Most of all I hate those police squads,
they come with these big ugly pile driving things
that send me to smithereens.
Now the only people I will give permission to knock me in are fire fighters.
Them guys are always trying to help someone.
Why can you all be like them,
Help someone.
Matters not it's a bum, 
someone next door who need a ride to the grocery store,
whoever, 
whatever it is, 
don't think twice just do it."
© A. Juman The "said" poet       11/8/2015
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Al Juman November 27, 2015 at 9:56 PM This takes to the point of what we should all be doing

Nette Onclaud November 12, 2015 at 1:59 AM smashing work..well done, a.... huggs A. Juman November 12, 2015 at 2:05 AM Sorry Nette My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Emile Pinet November 11, 2015 at 10:14 AM This is a well written, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. Your word choices and simplistic delivery make this a very interesting and thoughtful read. Emile. A. Juman November 11, 2015 at 10:40 AM Thank you my friend

Samiha Zubair November 11, 2015 at 9:37 AM Mental talk by the matter. A unique thought loved reading it A. Juman November 11, 2015 at 10:41 AM Thank you my friend

Kamran Rashid November 11, 2015 at 3:41 AM Nicely written brother ,,one needs to be true and not egoistic so that the doors of hate and boredom will be closed for ever#LOved it all from beginning to end A. Juman November 11, 2015 at 5:27 AM Kamran Thank you much my brother. I really appreciate it. for your kind words and please do look us up again you are most kind--Million of thanks here

Afolabi Muideen November 11, 2015 at 12:13 AM Your write is so true my friend, if this could be done we would all be much better in this world. A very great and excellent piece..........A.M. A. Juman November 11, 2015 at 5:28 AM Afo---Thank you much my brother. I really appreciate it. for your kind words and please do look us up again you are most kind--Million of thanks here

Vee Bdosa November 10, 2015 at 2:47 PM Very observant, and we should also recognize that doors open and close when we call them opportunity, hopefully they do not close too soon. It is always nice to give freinds and neighbors a hand, I carry some down to the Acme grocery store or Dunkin donuts when I see them walking in that direction. Lots of people in my neighborhood neither drive nor have anyone in the family who drives. so I keep an eye out for them. A. Juman November 10, 2015 at 2:59 PM Vee--Thank you my friend you are most kind it is the human thing to do. never know when we ourselves be in a circumstance of need. thanks again

Boipelo Mo November 10, 2015 at 2:06 PM Wow great poem,people should start noticingthe value of a simple thing like a door. A. Juman November 10, 2015 at 3:03 PM Boipelo-- thank you my friend --do let the door speak to you the messages are plenty. Come back to see us next week their will be another.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 10, 2015 at 7:22 AM If we thought all things have some form of feelings then we would better people be! Delightful poem with a clear message. Enjoyed it, dear A. Zaladin! A. Juman November 10, 2015 at 7:37 AM Demetrios ---Thanks a million for stopping by and spending time to read. Thanks again and do drop by again. I do practice the message everyday. They come to my gate Monday thru Thursday for a plate

Lord James November 10, 2015 at 4:41 AM great poem there Zaladin, never thought the door felt all that pain. thanks for letting us realize that. A. Juman November 10, 2015 at 4:47 AM Thanks for stopping by James. I really appreciate that you are a true friend---Glad you like it----Anything that brings out the best in us. I have one in the works for next week

Jill Spagnola November 9, 2015 at 2:29 PM Zaladin, I really love random acts of kindness as well. Hopefully it will strengthen mine and others' karma from the many doors in my life that you have personified. Great write, jill A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 2:46 PM Jill thanks for stopping by I really do appreciate--Thanks a billion and glad I can inspire someone thanks again

Terry Johnson November 9, 2015 at 1:04 PM Excellent write reminds me if a door that never closes to the heart. A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 1:28 PM I really appreciate that Terry thanks a million and do come back to visit.

Skat A November 9, 2015 at 11:01 AM I like this view A Zaladin. So much a door sees, yet I like the one thing expressed. SKAT A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 12:05 PM Thank you my dear-- Glad you enjoyed as that is indeed my goal

Anisha Dutta November 9, 2015 at 8:12 AM Well composed. Good to read. Best wishes. Anisha D A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 8:46 AM Anisha --Love your name. Thanks a million for stopping by and spending time to read. Thanks again and do drop by again

Richard Lamoureux November 9, 2015 at 7:57 AM This is clever and entertaining. A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 8:45 AM Richard thanks for all the time you spend thanks my friend

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 9, 2015 at 6:37 AM good personification!!! =`)!~Olive Eloisa =`) A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 8:44 AM Oliver, thanks a million I do appreciate you kindness stopping by

Ananthasagaran Narayanapillai November 9, 2015 at 3:59 AM wonderful poem,i enjoyed reading A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 4:18 AM Thank you Ananthasa I am really glad you like it. I appreciate you stopping by.

Lei Strauss November 9, 2015 at 2:22 AM I loved it A. Zaladin! Nice personification! I enjoyed it TFS A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 2:27 AM Thank you Lei My reply got mixed up but I really do appreciate that--Thanks a million do come back A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 2:24 AM Thank you Uriel very happy you like it Thanks a million my friend for the visit do come back

Uriel Wisdom November 9, 2015 at 2:02 AM This is Ingenius Zaladin gave me some ideas keep up your art A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 2:25 AM Thank you Uriel very happy you like it Thanks a million my friend for the visit do come back

Pete Yuhas November 8, 2015 at 7:19 PM Good write Zaladin, can't knock that poetry. Pete Yuhas A. Juman November 8, 2015 at 7:35 PM Pete you are most kind with your words to me Thank you my dear friend

Cherl Dunn November 8, 2015 at 4:49 PM Dear Zaladin Interesting write love the idea about telling your story from the doors point of view, you've expressed this very well, very modern subject matter nice write, thank you for inviting me to come by and read your work, I'll read another and review, cheri and thank you also for your review of mine, I'm truly flattered, take care A. Juman November 8, 2015 at 5:34 PM Thanks Cheri --Your word of encouragement keeps my mind tumbling to do better. Thanks a million.

Leon Enriquez November 8, 2015 at 4:25 PM Dear A. Zaladin: Nice write. Nice read. Enjoyed. Leon A. Juman November 8, 2015 at 4:33 PM Thank you Leon--I appreciate you positive comment

Tim Smith November 8, 2015 at 4:05 PM Many thoughts hinged on that door. Lovely personification A. Juman November 8, 2015 at 4:11 PM Many, many thanks Tim you give me confidence

Constance La France November 8, 2015 at 3:30 PM I love your personification of a door so creative and well done A. Juman November 8, 2015 at 4:00 PM Thanks my dear you have just made my day thank you

Anoucheka Gangabissoon November 8, 2015 at 11:28 AM Lovely write, I enjoyed it, please do keep writing and sharing more of your works :) XoXo Anoucheka A. Juman November 8, 2015 at 11:59 AM Anoucheka---Ouch that a nice name. Make me want to fall in love again. LOL -----I really appreciate that my dear and I will try my best to keep on writing

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