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Said the Cat To the Mouse

Said The Cat To The Mouse Said the cat to the mouse, “We could share this house, We need not share the food. You could eat cheese, Or whatever you please, And I could eat, err …. mouse!” Barry Stebbings 02/09/16

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/6/2017 12:21:00 AM

I do love the humor in this little rhyme :) Reminds me of my Sparkling Pebbles.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/6/2017 2:08:00 PM

Thank you, Debbie. // Barry

Jan Allison

Date: 9/18/2016 1:26:00 PM

love the dark humour here Barry lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/19/2016 10:11:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. Barry

Beverly Read

Date: 9/7/2016 1:08:00 PM

Ha ha. Very cute! Put a smile on my face.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/7/2016 1:15:00 PM

Thank you, Beverly. Barry

Indiana Shaw

Date: 9/2/2016 11:15:00 PM

The mouse replied - forwarned am I as to your next meal - is there any chance we can do a deal . . . ; )

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/3/2016 12:49:00 PM

Very good, Indiana. Thanks. Barry.

Gail Lewis

Date: 9/2/2016 6:53:00 PM

Brilliant 7!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/3/2016 12:48:00 PM

Thank you for the 7, Gail. Barry

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/2/2016 6:03:00 PM

Now this is FUNNY! I laughed out loud Barry. Thanks for the chuckle.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/3/2016 12:48:00 PM

Thank you Daniel. Barry.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2016 12:26:00 PM

- Unfair !!! - // Anne-Lise :)

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/3/2016 12:47:00 PM

I don't understand, Anne-Lise. ??? Barry

Jennifer Christie Temple

Date: 9/2/2016 12:14:00 PM

I enjoyed this, Barry. It's the type of poem that children love - funny but with a little dark edge! You should get a collection together and publish them :)

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/3/2016 12:46:00 PM

Thank you very much for your encouragement, Jennifer. Barry.