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Sagittariously Speaking

We will ride straight into the sun
Come back burnt, claiming it was fun
Our aim is usually on the mark
Any miss was because of the dark
Ask for advice we'll give you a ton

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2011 11:05:00 PM

rereading this cute one. Love the title of it, MItch.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2010 8:34:00 AM

Hey, Mitch, as per your comments, you really deserve recognition for your limericks. There are several great limerick writers here and you are among them! Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/30/2010 12:48:00 AM

excellent limerick Mitch, Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/29/2010 9:38:00 AM

So clever, Mitch. Now I know what to expect from a Sagitarrius and I won't be folowing any of them "straight into the sun." Before I move I am updating my favorite poets list and want to be sure you're on there. Your poetry has given me a lot of laughs and you are one of the premiere limerick writers here. Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 9/28/2010 12:49:00 PM

Many congratulations Mitch on your win in pd's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Mitch in P. D.'S contest "Zodiac Race" Love,Carol

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2010 7:26:00 PM

MITCH, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN A JoB WELL DoNE, ENJoYED YoUR ENTRY 4 P.D's ZoDIAC CoNTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/26/2010 9:56:00 AM

last line is right on the money, describes my youngest to a tee, congrats on your win in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/26/2010 5:05:00 AM

Congratulations on this super win in the contest, Mitch

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/26/2010 4:23:00 AM

Hi Mitch-- how are you?? :) This sure gives wonderful insight to Sagittarius -- enjoyed reading this and congrats on your win :) -- nikko :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/26/2010 1:41:00 AM

HI Mitch, Congratulations!! Thanks for a job well done, enjoyed your entry. Had fun reading,,lol,, I could have skipped the judging part, well some one had to. Glad you where among my winners,..p.d.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/26/2010 12:26:00 AM

Hey Mitch, congrats on your win in the contest ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2010 11:21:00 PM

Clever and metaphoric, Mitch. Great title. congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2010 10:36:00 PM

Congrats Mitch on your super win in P.D.'s contest with this awesome write on Sag sign.. one of my sons is a Sag and boy u hit it right luv.. enjoy your sweet success this happy Sunday with luv...

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/24/2010 11:01:00 AM

I have a few Sagi friends, you guys sure have a way of doing things differently Mitch.. Good to see you are still around :) Thanks for your comment as well. Hope your weekend will be magical ~ Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/6/2010 4:35:00 AM

Mitch, What a fun Limerick, it made me smile as soon as I read the second line.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/2/2010 1:58:00 PM

hi Mitch :) Well this sure gave me some insight into being a Sagittarius (haha I only found out recently that my Moon sign is Sagittarius)-- nikko :)