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Golden sets of surfs surfaces, delves a surreal saffron sky, Sands surrender shoeless soles, that traipsed an eclipsing trail, Amber rays supremely heralds, as an ochered beach comply, Gild glitters halcyon flocked doves, sprung free a summer's veil. Date: May 12, 2019

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Date: 6/27/2019 9:10:00 AM
This is beautiful William, I see it was a winner in another contest, not my criteria, but too late now!
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/27/2019 12:40:00 PM
After telling others my plans, they said don't, c'est la vie.
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/27/2019 10:59:00 AM
I was told by another souper, if my poem was placed in another contest, sponsors will 'state' as being welcomed, whereto, you did not. I do not list my poems as an honorable mention lest it's the top three spots, irrespective of its placement #. My next sponsored contest will just be for the top 3 and none other. Thank you for eyes wide open and the wiser for it, John ~ William
Date: 5/20/2019 2:15:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your thoughts on summer, William, congrats on your win. John
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William Kekaula
Date: 5/20/2019 2:30:00 PM
Many thanks John, Aloha wk
Date: 5/19/2019 9:35:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, William! Janice
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Date: 5/19/2019 9:39:00 PM
Thanks a whole lot and likewise Janice, Aloha wk
Date: 5/19/2019 5:33:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win, William.
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William Kekaula
Date: 5/19/2019 5:46:00 PM
You have my appreciation likewise, Andrea congrats indeed, Aloha wk
Date: 5/19/2019 4:30:00 PM
Congrats, William)
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William Kekaula
Date: 5/19/2019 5:47:00 PM
Many thanks Kurt, Aloha wk
Date: 5/19/2019 4:03:00 PM
Delightful, William. Congrats.
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William Kekaula
Date: 5/19/2019 5:48:00 PM
I am honored Line, Aloha wk
Date: 5/14/2019 3:10:00 AM
Wonderfully written, William! I really enjoyed this poem!!
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Date: 5/14/2019 3:19:00 AM
Hey, thanks a whole lot Briauna, from a night owl in Hawaii who's waiting for the blessed a.m., Aloha wk