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From Dispatch to Bus Drivers Poetry Contest Sponsored by Miranda Hawley
08/04/23

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When you’re driving please please be aware of those walking or with a pushchair. Watch for elderly who may be slow and for cyclists not wearing day glo. Stick to speed limits and never race and keep a wide smile on your face!

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Date: 8/7/2023 7:37:00 AM
that smile from a stranger could make your day.. nice to remember we are that for others! :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2023 5:50:00 AM
thanks so much sweet Sneha:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/4/2023 11:36:00 AM
An awesome way to bring attention to those who ofttimes move with lack uv care...should be the manditory sticker for backs uv school buses dear poet ;) Have a wonderful summer Jan....much love, james
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2023 11:06:00 AM
thanks James, purely written for the contest but it was a fabulous prompt:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/4/2023 10:54:00 AM
Great advice. But I've seen some bus drivers that are not as cautious, just anxious to drop of the kids. Good luck my friend
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2023 8:14:00 AM
I've been on the school bus for field trips many times and it got pretty noisy.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2023 11:05:00 AM
true Eve, but safety first I guess and having seen the behaviour of kids inside school I am sure the driver's can't wait to get rid of some of them! hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/4/2023 5:44:00 AM
A school bus with a load of noisy children is a reason for a driver's headache! It's a big responsibility to have so many little lives in their hands. Good reminders for everyone, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2023 11:04:00 AM
I don't know how they cope especially seeing the behaviour of the kids inside school! hugs jan xx
Date: 8/4/2023 12:06:00 AM
And there you go all wrap up in one! Great fun poem Jan with a serious message!! Debx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2023 11:04:00 AM
thanks Deb, it would never have been written without the contest prompt:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/3/2023 10:44:00 PM
Bus drivers often get a bad rap, but with this succinct note, they could enhance their image in no time. (Over here, bus drivers and people taxis are cowboys on the roads.)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2023 11:30:00 PM
Thanks Suz, I had fun writing for the contest . :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/3/2023 7:52:00 PM
How can i NOT be smiling, when 'mary jane' i've been stockpiling?! ~ Hash Brown Knees
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2023 11:28:00 PM
you make me lol thanks GW:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/3/2023 6:57:00 PM
your message is big for a small poem; drivers are to much in a rush these days and it only takes one time for a life to be ruined - Thank you for this reminder! Terry!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2023 11:28:00 PM
Thanks so much:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/3/2023 5:22:00 PM
a fun read and safety warning! I hadn’t read your note, Jan, and I thought ‘Ice cream van driver’. However… good luck in Miranda’s contest
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2023 5:26:00 PM
lol thanks Terry, its late lol:-) hugs jan xx
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