Sadness Within My Heart

tears that fall,twice as hard..and the sadness in my eyes
you hurt me,not in the mind.but in the heart and soul.
it feels like a arrow that pierce me not once but twice.
you gave me no reason why you left,you told me I was 
somebody special and I was a pebble kicked to the curve
I gave you,love, shelter,compassion, kindness, faithless  
I even gave you my heart.what more you want,

you couldn't face me face to face,because the tears in your
eyes wouldn't stop falling.
will i forgive her i don't know,but in due time our hearts will
mend
never say forever more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/31/2012 8:16:00 PM
sad,lost love,sound like a tough guy you will be back lol,nice write David
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Date: 10/31/2012 11:49:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today David. Hope to read more of it soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2012 9:09:00 PM
Sometimes words don't heal a broken heart, but they help along with time. In the meantime pls don't lose hope...stay true to yourself, don't settle and be strong. Annalise
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Date: 10/30/2012 4:13:00 PM
Don't worry you will soon find someone else, plenty fish in the sea as they say, so cheer up, and look on the bright side of life : ) enjoyed your lovely poem, love Elizabeth
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