Cynthia Buhain-Baello Poet Dodoitsu

Sadly Confused

He said he was a "woman",

Just trapped in a wrong body.

When time came he had to pee-

Used the room.... for "Men".
 
All rights reserved~~Cynthia Buhain-Baello~~05.28.15


The Dodoitsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin 
and is often about LOVE  or HUMOR. It has 26 syllables, 
four lines of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respectively. 
It is unrhymed and non-metrical.

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Funom Makama May 28, 2015 at 10:30 AM Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7! Cynthia Buhain-Baello November 28, 2017 at 10:42 AM Thank you Funom Makama Cynthia Buhain-Baello November 28, 2017 at 10:42 AM Thank you Funom Makama