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He said he was a "woman", Just trapped in a wrong body. When time came he had to pee- Used the room.... for "Men". All rights reserved~~Cynthia Buhain-Baello~~05.28.15 The Dodoitsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and is often about LOVE or HUMOR. It has 26 syllables, four lines of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respectively. It is unrhymed and non-metrical.

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Date: 5/28/2015 10:30:00 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 11/28/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Funom Makama
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 11/28/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Funom Makama