Sadie Hawkins' Dance Date

Freshman year, newcomer to public school,
   my hormones were roused by Billy D. in typing class.

Sadie Hawkins’ Dance just days away;
   a chance for girls to ask boys out.

Too shy to show my interest,
   crumpled bits of paper I formed into balls,
   tossed them at the back of Billy’s head.

Unsettled, as any boy would be, he glanced back at me.

Wry smile, how could he know how my heart raced?

Leo sat next to Billy, amused by this interaction.

Because of his demeanor, it was Leo I asked to the dance.

Turned out Leo couldn’t dance,
   though conversation was no problem.

Leo spent the entire night talking about being an Eagle Scout --
   tying knots, marking trails, building campfires --
   seemed we had little in common.

No chemistry at all, but Leo said, “Thank you,” at the dance’s end.

For years I spent many days wondering
   what if I’d slipped Billy an invitation note,
   instead of lobbing paper balls?

Perhaps he would have said, “Yes.”

I might have had my first embrace;
   maybe even my first kiss.

Years later at a school reunion
   Billy looked more handsome than ever;
   served as CEO of a Fortune 500 corporation.

He introduced me to his pretty wife
   as the girl who pitched paper balls at his head.



*True story for Carol Brown’s “First Date” contest.  (Some folks were lucky to have 
more romantic first dates.  LOL)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 7:58 AM
hahaha, the last part is genius! I LOVE yours and would have put it with the first place ones. Congrats. LUv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 5:06 AM
So nice to see you win & such a great tale! [You are VERY cautious time to let loose ;)]I couldn't remember my first date? Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 6:11 PM
To search and miss, a stolen kiss, is better than the real thing, well done with thoughts and reminice, as into pictures springs. xo, Don
Mehta Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 3:41 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Carolyn
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 1:58 PM
You wrote a fantastic true read I enjoyed it very much.Atleast you didn't break down and walk 6 miles to a phone now thats romantic cause talked all the way.Congrats on this terrific win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Brown Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 8:04 AM
Lovely witty piece, Carolyn. And presumably he never knew why you tossed paper balls at him, LOL
Poet Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 3:26 PM
Very lovely story of your first date Carolyn...liked it.Best wishes in Carol's contest.
Zzzzz Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 12:17 PM
An interesting and amusing story. Most of us have at least one awkward teenage years tale to tell. Good luck in the contest. Love, Robert.
Thomas Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 6:07 PM
Wow, this is really good. Kinda sad, happy, and funny all at the same time. I really liked it, keep on writing! =)
Roberts Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 4:37 PM
wonderful entry for the contest
Long Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 3:48 PM
that is awesome go job. Your first date ended better then mine haha. cory
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