Sad Violin, O Heart of Mine

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Aug. 15, 2024 9.25am

So lovely to hear in a melancholic reel Those sweet melodies crossing valleys and hills, It's my last dance with you dad before giving my hands To the one I dearly love and live forever to my man. Sad violin in each soulful melody, A great reminder that I’m nurtured by you lovingly; For I’m old enough to be like my gorgeous mother, Sad violin of goodbye in its tune, Dad's always my angel.

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Len Gasun

Date: 9/29/2024 12:37:00 AM

Sad Violin Tunes, O Heart of Mine Contest Judged: 9/23/2024 9:21:00 AM Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon Place 4 (up to 4 mutli-w)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/23/2024 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. How did I miss this wonderful violin write??? I enjoyed reading this one very much. Great Ending... Yes, he is your angel. I love to hear the sound of a violin. Not always sad. Hugs... Have fun day writing away...............

Len Gasun
Date: 9/29/2024 12:32:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Paula. Congratulation too dear poet friend. Thanks also for your encouraging comments and loving support. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/18/2024 8:22:00 PM

Len, this poem is SO lovely and touching! Janice

Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:39:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Janice for reading my poem and your uplifting comment. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 8/18/2024 8:03:00 PM

So achingly sweet and thoughtful how youv written this poem, i love how youv expressed grief and nostalgia, some melodies bring back so many memories, but to know that once there were good moments shared with those loved ones is special really! Felt the emotions youve expressed throughout this touching poem! Sending you light always.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:34:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your insightful comment and encouraging words my dear poet friend. Ink. Thank you for the blessings of light. Likewise and God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 8/17/2024 8:27:00 PM

So odd: my most viewed newest poem without comment ha ha ha