Sharon Ruebel Poet Rhyme

Sad Today

I'm sad today I cannot see
The good in things they fail me.

I want to laugh and feel free
To be the best that I can be.

The Sun came up
and then went down and
on its way it left a frown.

It took my smile and left me  tears
It left me here with all my fears.

I want to sleep and dream of things
Much nicer than today has been.

Tomorrow when I wake in bed
Perhaps good things will fill my head.

The laughter may return once more
And find the place it was before.

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Robert Pettit January 25, 2012 at 11:48 PM Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Nice set of rhyming couplets.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 24, 2012 at 12:01 PM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Sharon. Love, Carol

James Fraser October 5, 2010 at 2:20 PM Close your eyes and drift away, to beautiful places you've heard people say. Open you eyes and absorb the view, you'll feel the smile that's inside of you >> James

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2010 at 3:27 PM this was really nice, just what it claimed to be about! Luv, andrea

Ema Anderson April 6, 2010 at 4:16 PM Great Poem!

Destiny Budd April 6, 2010 at 3:58 PM That sounds like an awfully sad day. I especially love where you say "The Sun came up and then went down and on its way it left a frown." it really got me. Nice write.

Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2010 at 3:10 PM Nice one . Enjoyed the read