Sad Surprise

love is a marionette, kissed by kismet,
stitching in secret ~
the cursive cure from Cupid’s strings,
whilst this ink slowly breathes
on the silent sinews of devotion,
as if the heart never knew
the synonyms of the soul’s touch,
too afraid to embrace
the sound of the wind ~
  caught in your dreams,
for the inner child
harbors bruised blues,
b r e e z i n g through abandoned dawns…

and I sit in my seclusion,
sipping the aftertaste 
             of a sad surprise ~
haunting my psyche,
knocking on my cruel conscience,
for romance has always been
the start of an undeniable unraveling ~
of hurt and illusions,
of sorrow and helplessness ~
a peony that pains and pines
beneath its own lament,
yet still I muse ~
tasting the testaments of truth,
of what could have been
and what almost was,
for the ending was the beginning
of my heart’s harp harmonizing,
plucking aching echoes
from coffin-colored chords,
cryptic cadence,
that still lives in the afterglow
of an amethyst sunset ~
painted with tears and time…

so remember me
as more than a poem
spun from metaphors of misery ~
in desolate delight,
as I am the silhouette 
of your solitary scribbles,
the sigh that drifts 
         between your syllables,
a rhyme of what was crafted 
in silence,
and what bleeds on endlessly…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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matrix Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 5:17 AM
can you see my poem' vastness within' pls just to known how to improve
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May 15, 2026 at 5:17 AM
can you see my poem' vastness within' pls just to known how to improve
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 7:39 PM
Wow. Top of best 100 new poems list, Ink. Way to go. You sparkle like a diamond with this gem of a poem
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 3:47 PM
Just spectacular writing, Inky. This masterpiece has it all, metaphors, alliteration, imagery, message, euphony, etc. You never fail to deliver. An instant fave for me. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest.
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 12:13 AM
Thank you so much dear EI for the placement inspiration and comment, you are definitely one of my fave hosts! Sending you light always
Neumann Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:12 AM
I could not agree more. Kind wishes, Kai
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 12:13 AM
Thank you so much dear kai. Appreciate your visit
Bordner Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 4:14 PM
WoW Poetess!!! You are a masterpiece in vibrant motion...a FAV!!!...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 3:57 AM
Thank you so very much dear Justin, for the fave and support, im grateful. Sending you light always
Buhagiar Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 2:36 AM
There is lingering pain and sadness in this poem. Great emotions. Love lost and all its hurt. You describe the finality of love so well.
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 3:57 AM
Ah thank you dear Victor for feeling my words. I appreciate always your support. Sending you light always
Lane Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 12:37 AM
Cupid and I have battled a couple of times. His arrows leave deep wounds whose scars remind us that love pulls the strings and we are helpless against its power. You’ve written these lines as if they were tributaries of tears thar are crying on their way to drown in the sea, having lost the reason to go on living. Your verses bleed, Ink.
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 4:03 AM
Your comments are as poetic as your poems dear linnersz, thank you so very much for your thoughtful and beautiful comment that is soul warming. Sending you light always
Cunningham Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 10:56 PM
We all go through life expecting things to go our way but that's not always the way things go and occasionally we encounter a sad surprise. Excellent writing IE. Tom
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 4:06 AM
Dear Tom, I really am grateful for your unwavering support honestly, youv always been so kind! Sending you light today and always.
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 8:51 PM
Excellent take on the topic. Love is indeed a surprise and then I think for many , it just turns sad. Gotts fave this one
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 4:12 AM
Awn thank you sweet Andrea for also the fave. Im truly honored by your response. Sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 6:13 PM
This is such an emotional poem. It was a pleasure to read your thoughts as you wrote them… even if they were sad.
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 4:17 AM
Thank you so much, for reading and feeling my words dear Robert, I appreciate your kind support truly. Sending you light always
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April 5, 2026 at 3:35 PM
The way I just died at your feet! :0 how do you write like this!? Omg I'm hollowed out and hurting for the pain of unwritten torment. The skill of your pen is undeniable - I was drawn into every line. I know scared to trust good things - I know scared to trust anything, I look for evidence in time and evidence in others but still I struggle in self belief. Let me advocate though as I'm sure many others will. Even if only a poem, poets can gift this belief in another poets soul x
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 4:18 AM
Haha died at my feet! I hope u are breathing fine now! Honestly the contest was closing and was in a hurry to write so this turned into a bleed out. Was cathartic. Your comment means alot, thank you so much truly, sending you light always
Mael Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 3:17 PM
Great prosody, real craft!
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 4:25 AM
Thank you so much, Im grateful for your visit and kindness. Sending you light always
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 3:02 PM
Hello Ink Empress, this poem sounds sad. That is i how i felt when reding this poem. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 11:55 AM
Hello Ink Express I read this poem as sad. Thank you for sen ding m e the light. Hugs. /Darlene/
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 4:33 AM
Yes dear Darlene, it could be sad for some to read real Feelings. I appreciate your kindness and empathy, Sending you light always
DiMino Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 2:36 PM
"for romance has always been the start of an undeniable unraveling ~" Ain't that the truth! "I am the silhouette of your solitary scribbles, the sigh that drifts between your syllables," -- Love that. Very poet. Another enchanting read.
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