Sad Journeyman of Death

Sad Journeyman of Death

Sad journeyman of life’s unending tests
bides time in loathsome sojourn cross each dawn
respecting naught but future’s numbered breaths
a-weep upon the touch of bloodied thorn,

Aroused to madness ‘neath the scent of war
bathes in the fearful prayers as fleeing life
soaks the rusting fields of nevermore
too soon, too soon regaled by drum and fife.

Slowly the agony of youth expires
thrust now upon old roots as unleafed trees
clutch the unspent lies of life’s desires
to live, to age, another day to seize.

Sad journeyman this lonely hypocrite
Death wields his scythe yet doesn’t sharpen it.


10/29/2017

//sonnet//

submitted to – DEATH – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:21 PM
Wonderfully crafted poem, John. Loved it.
George   Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 2:03 PM
Wow! What a unique take on this subject matter, John. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Sincerely, Elaine
Inman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 1:40 AM
Love the last line John. The pain of life followed by the pain of death.
Carmack Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 1:14 PM
This is my favorite from those I have read so far. Congrats John on your win.
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