Sacrifice

A sweet scent of the morning rose
A sweet smell of an early drizzle
A prick of the finger
A tear from the eye
A lonesome ride...down a nostalgic road
These are the moments showing
Sacrifice in my life,
So I say Ameen!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 11, 2010 at 11:45 AM
that is a good write and i wonder who you picked that rose for, very sweet and ameen! =)jo
O'Leary Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 9:37 PM
This is a beautiful poem! Great Job! Thanks for the compliment on my poem! I really appreciate it!
Brown Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 4:12 PM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us today Seema. Love, Carol
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