Sacred Room

His whispering kisses are like droplets of pure
Caressing my porcelain skin in wanting allure
Nape to lobes, he sprinkles his fire
Enticing my response knowing I'll desire

I hear his thoughts as he looks into my eyes
He and I, in responding reply
Dishevelled clothes lie in abandoned scatter
The beat of my heart enters pitter patter

On Rose petals we lie with scented bloom
Whilst candles joyously burn in our sacred room
The light they emit shadows two wanting souls
As their shapes resonate, applauding their goal

Sighs of delight, echo abound
For in their sacred room, two have been found









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Foulk Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 9:21 AM
a very beautiful creative poem. thank you for reading my the cellar door and for your comment
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 12:21 AM
James, wish I could seek out a poem of yours I have not read. but it's very late and I am saying adios to all my friends before I leave in the morning for three days. Have a nice weekend, YOU
Sweetheart Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 6:08 PM
Seductive scene with delicate overtones of passion and emotion mixture James.. my fav kinda poetry luv.. stirs the senses to new heights.. perfection ..happy weekend..luv..
Neels Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 7:19 AM
James such passion, now where is my sacred room?? love and enjoyed your sonnet this afternoon ;) enjoy the week ahead as well ;)
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 2:53 PM
Yes, this is a passionate sonnet,James. It's good to see you experimenting with forms like this!
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Oh, now you've got me wishing there were a man in my life, James. Just so romantic and passionate. Such a beautiful sonnet! You made great use of one of my favorite forms. I believe sonnets originated as "love poems" and now have taken on many other themes. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 10:16 AM
james!! exquisitely erotic... makes me think d.h. lawrence... a feast for the senses..:) huggs, nette
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