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Sacred Room

His whispering kisses are like droplets of pure Caressing my porcelain skin in wanting allure Nape to lobes, he sprinkles his fire Enticing my response knowing I'll desire I hear his thoughts as he looks into my eyes He and I, in responding reply Dishevelled clothes lie in abandoned scatter The beat of my heart enters pitter patter On Rose petals we lie with scented bloom Whilst candles joyously burn in our sacred room The light they emit shadows two wanting souls As their shapes resonate, applauding their goal Sighs of delight, echo abound For in their sacred room, two have been found http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-17.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/5/2011 9:21:00 AM
a very beautiful creative poem. thank you for reading my the cellar door and for your comment
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Date: 4/1/2011 12:21:00 AM
James, wish I could seek out a poem of yours I have not read. but it's very late and I am saying adios to all my friends before I leave in the morning for three days. Have a nice weekend, YOU
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Date: 3/25/2011 6:08:00 PM
Seductive scene with delicate overtones of passion and emotion mixture James.. my fav kinda poetry luv.. stirs the senses to new heights.. perfection ..happy weekend..luv..
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Date: 3/21/2011 7:19:00 AM
James such passion, now where is my sacred room?? love and enjoyed your sonnet this afternoon ;) enjoy the week ahead as well ;)
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Date: 3/20/2011 2:53:00 PM
Yes, this is a passionate sonnet,James. It's good to see you experimenting with forms like this!
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Date: 3/20/2011 10:32:00 AM
Oh, now you've got me wishing there were a man in my life, James. Just so romantic and passionate. Such a beautiful sonnet! You made great use of one of my favorite forms. I believe sonnets originated as "love poems" and now have taken on many other themes. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/20/2011 10:16:00 AM
james!! exquisitely erotic... makes me think d.h. lawrence... a feast for the senses..:) huggs, nette
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