thriveni c mysore Poet Shape

Sacred Crane

"This is our Cry, This is our Prayer, That there shall be Peace in the World" -
Sadako Sasaki Statue, Hiroshima
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                                                                  ###20 Mya*                                                                   
                                                              # Ancient  B  ird, LARGE      
                                                            Muted gray, white plumage–
                                                             Vibrant crowns                                                                              
                                                                     L  O
                                                                        N  G                          
                                                                              L   O
                                                                                 N   G                             
                                                                                 NECKS                                                                                                                  
                                                                     Grey - crowned
                                                                  Black - crowned
                                                          Siberian , Sandhill
                                                 White-naped, Brolga//,
                                            Sarus, Wattled, Blue,///
                                       Demoiselle,Red-crowned,// 
                                   Whooping,Common,Hooded 
                                 Black-necked, migratory 
                               trumpeting calls,dancer,
                             lifemates,loving parents
                           "+//-"         G   B
                                             R   E                                           
                                             A   A
                                             C   U
                                             E   TI
                                             F    F
                                             U   U
                                             L    L
                                    H o l y  B i r d

*Mya – million years ago

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Sotto Poet March 6, 2025 at 11:54 AM Impressive. I admire this one, Very original and astute Thriveni. You deserve this win, so congratulations! thriveni c mysore March 6, 2025 at 7:49 PM You are so kind with your words dear poet, words that brings me delight. Thank you very much. I count this as a blessing. Thank you dear poet.

Crystol Woods March 5, 2025 at 11:36 AM Gorgeous shape!!! Xo thriveni c mysore March 6, 2025 at 6:17 AM Thank you dear for your kind visit dear friend, I am glad you liked this. Thank you very much.

Margaret Foster March 3, 2025 at 1:05 AM Only just found this one. How clever and creative I’m sure it’ll be a winner cheers. thriveni c mysore March 3, 2025 at 6:19 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked this, brings a smile. Thank you for the blessings.

Karen Jones February 24, 2025 at 3:27 PM Wow! Love the shape! Great job! thriveni c mysore February 24, 2025 at 5:54 PM I bet you do haha, thank you dear friend for your kind visit. brings a smile to my face, thank you very much.hugs.

Paula Goldsmith February 24, 2025 at 1:31 PM WOW!!! What a write you have here. Love the shape. Your pen was working overtime on this one. "Good Luck" You are already a winner in my book. Have a great day writing away............... thriveni c mysore February 24, 2025 at 5:53 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am so happy to pocket your generous thoughts, I am grateful to you for the blessings. thank you friend.

Janice Canerdy February 23, 2025 at 11:48 AM Thriveni, this is an amazing accomplishment! So creative~~also informative! Janice thriveni c mysore February 24, 2025 at 1:01 AM thank you dear poet for your kind visit and generous words. thank you very much. I appreciate the support, helps me a lot. cheers.

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2025 at 11:11 AM Wow. GREAT job! thriveni c mysore February 24, 2025 at 1:00 AM oh! thank you dear poet for your kind visit. your expression is precious to me, you just made my day. thank you. cheers

I Am Anaya February 23, 2025 at 10:23 AM Precious, Thriveni, beautiful ancient birds and words teachings us. The neck's remarkable. Brilliant! thriveni c mysore February 24, 2025 at 12:59 AM Thank you for your kind visit. your words are so sweet to me, thank you for the smile, thank you very much. cheers

Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2025 at 4:15 AM Oh this is so darling! A fave! thriveni c mysore February 24, 2025 at 12:56 AM I am so honored by your fave. thank you dear poet for the appreciation, keeps me going. thank you.

David Crandall February 22, 2025 at 11:54 AM Beautiful picture Thriveni - great job. I like the l o n g neck and the l o n g legs best. thriveni c mysore February 22, 2025 at 6:53 PM haha, thank you for your kind visit dear friend, I had to trim her down by 30 % nearly as I could not post. so the outer feathers and a few more details got cut-off. I didn't know there was character limit in PS till I posted this one! Now my adult crane looks like a colt! but did you check on the quote? story behind the quote is inspiring. thanks again dear poet. cheers!!!