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Saboteur

To a completely reasonable decree
The angry onslaught launched in retort:
“You cannot care about me…”
Achieved the goal – direct hit.

In response, you were muted. 
So still you might be departed.
Yet I shot again, just to see 
If you remained upright.

To my surprise, within moments 
You launched your own projectile,
Which smashed with alarming accuracy.
(You’re quite a marksman.)

I pretended it didn’t hurt me.
The truth is that I’m dying.

Stunned and silently bleeding, 
I think back now to how this battle
Started the war that I knew
Would break us.

It wasn't a calculated decision.
My declaration – Hurt.
Your retreat – Hurt more.

Such a barren waste, this place 
Where no man's land resides.

Surely, I was a gonner if I remained 
Where I was – so I fought you.
You fired back – in love, and
In war, we took no prisoners

And led each other to our death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/21/2013 7:33:00 PM
The war of words and anger and hurt powerful descriptions of human emotions living up to their destructive potential. This poem was brilliantly written. Thank you
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