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tattered barn along expressway bearing another storm lives in shadows of its time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/20/2016 6:14:00 PM
It's melancholy and I like it.
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Date: 4/12/2016 3:08:00 PM
Mike, this is wonderful! Your last line nails it! #7. ; )
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