Sabbath Evening Rap Up Sequence (2)

-continued from  "Sabbath Morning Rap".

..and so brethren,
We're lost in the lust of loving lies
Conceived and retrieved as alibies.
to woo what we would instead of should,
To deify deeds ordained to deny
that Jesus Christ was crucified,

For you and me and he and she,
He lived and loved and agonized,
to dis the devil and tear his ties
to the role of the soul in his hellish hole.

Cause the devil is real and that's the deal
So if hate is your food and your crude and lewd,
you're flirtin' with hurtin', you're comin' unglued.

The devil is there so ya better beware
You're struttin his stuff and doin' your share.
Take a look around before ya drown
in the fire of his fate and the heat of his hate.

But Christ is saying :
My Peace I leave, My Peace I give
to those that ask Me to help them live.
And if you don't believe I can show you the way'
open your heart so you can pray.
Ill give you a sign for you to define.
What do you say gotta do it today.

Now it's up to you, whatever you do.
Don't wait too long cause the chance'll be gone.
Amen, I say, Throw your pride away,
I want you Here ...with ME ...to Stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/11/2011 4:58:00 AM
I'm selective about the rap I hear. I could handle a lot more of this. Excellent write. On to the next. Vince
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:09:00 PM
Dear Robert, I would LOVE to attend Church with YOU someday We have very similar beliefs Many Years ago I danced with Satan but he is the Great deceiver and I almost fell into his flaming pit I know I keep repeating myself but I stand in awe of YOUR Laureate POETRY ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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Date: 1/24/2010 7:45:00 PM
Dear Robert, I'll be write back after i read and Comment on the first half of this Great POEM Always YOUR POETIC Buddy...HG
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Date: 12/5/2009 1:18:00 AM
Interesting testiment to your beliefs and faith. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and reading and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 12/3/2009 9:07:00 AM
Can I have an " Amen" Amen... Not liking rap to much I loved this piece.. Straight to my Favs...RdP
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Date: 12/3/2009 8:52:00 AM
Such a great testimony for the Lord!
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