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Sabbath

His nails have dug into his palms;
they do that kind of thing.
It's only when he's hearing psalms,
and hearing others sing.

"Oh why, dear God?" he says on Sunday,
knowing there's no lord.
"I do so wish to get to Monday,
feel no longer bored."

Yet he will know, when starting Monday,
working now for six,
the seventh day will be a Sunday -
moods are such a mix.

He therefore holds no sabbath dear
(though nails have pierced the palms);
he's far from cheer, and feels the fear
he'll hear those bloody psalms.

(Oct 2022)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 24, 2022 at 1:59 AM
A fine poem, psalms but no sabbath eh. Its not that aheistic mindsets dont know God, they are too arrogant, egoistic and rebellious to acknowledge a creator and higher power. You wrote it so well. ^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^^^^^ plz also read and comment my newest poem too"
John Avatar
November 24, 2022 at 4:35 AM
Thank you, SZK, for your comment. Our "man" in the poem clearly doesn't really believe in a god, and neither does the writer (i.e. Yours Truly). I have not believed in spirity stuff all my life. But I'm always pleased to see comments.
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