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S U B L I M E

SUBLIME Sublime I've been shedding snakeskin... so blind I've been destroying the noise my worst enemy Deconstructing my identity soaking shoulder deep in oceans of humility feasting upon fruits of tranquility breaking shackles freeing ankles from bloody mud puddles razor blade anxiety rising to a place where yesterday flees irrelevant tomorrow is insufficient Yet this moment of SUBLIMITY right now... forever remains a fearless paradise

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Kyle Kriticos

Date: 10/1/2016 9:18:00 PM

Very powerful mr robot drone you are a versatile writer with deep depths of honesty and fresh insight. I know i am am reading from a good author when i start counting pages, chapters , or in this case poems dreading the time i run out, hope u keep going

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/23/2016 4:04:00 PM

2nd stanza is superb, as is the whole piece. Great write JS.

Karissa Kelley

Date: 3/19/2016 7:47:00 PM

I'm obsessed! This resonates with me deeply. You commented on my Cobain Smile poem years ago and your words have stuck with me til this day. Thank you again.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/18/2016 7:16:00 PM

Thank you, I learned something today. Carpe Diem... Nicely done

Joel Thornton

Date: 12/13/2014 2:57:00 AM

WELL DONE!!! VERY GOOD!

David Nickle Read

Date: 11/1/2014 8:15:00 PM

I'm slightly obsessed with all that can happen within a moment, existence on the brink...your words stand there and have the sublime at their core...immense!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/20/2014 9:55:00 AM

I suppose being free from the past (shedding of skin and shackles) and not worrying about the future does leave you with a sublime moment in time....and that is the present. Enjoy it and make good use of it. a 7 rating // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2014 6:58:00 PM

I don't know Joey, you are going to come out of this perfectly... I can't even shed my snake skin....hahahha, so you my friend are sublime, and fearless when it comes to poetry... A quality, I enjoy with others... No fear my poetic friend... LINDA

James Horn

Date: 9/7/2014 7:17:00 PM

Sounds like a woman shaving her legs. I had to read it quickly through the first time. The second time it all fell into place. Neat. Mine was poem of the day on August 16 about Robin Williams. What inspired you to write this poem? People need an introduction to their poems so the reader can feel right at home reading them and can identify with them. Also, what city are you from. You are a Super Duper Doper Poetry Souper. Wow, Jim Horn

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/7/2014 6:56:00 PM

AHA, you blast out another gem my friend and Poem of the day finds it. Bravo, keep da ink flowing bro' ... YA DA MAN!!!!! Big Congrats! At least this old soul thinks so!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/7/2014 6:02:00 PM

Congratulations JS for the Poem of the Day. Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 9/7/2014 12:58:00 PM

great write - I dont mind you shedding your skins but no snakey eyes please Mr Roboto ... great to see you honoured with poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/7/2014 9:45:00 AM

Congrats on being poem of the day! ;-)

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/7/2014 7:34:00 AM

Congrats on being poem of the day :) always good to read you ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2014 6:58:00 AM

- The day poems !!! - Congrats my friend! - Well written :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/7/2014 6:31:00 AM

Congrats bro on POTD

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/7/2014 2:08:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen poem of the day. A brilliant write.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/6/2014 4:30:00 AM

Discovering the inner self is a process that, certainly, sheds some snakeskin, but the results, as you so marvelously show, are sublime, dear JS!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/6/2014 1:24:00 AM

I love 'this moment of sublimity',without the yesterday and tomorrow.I love the 'Now' of the moment,without the noise,the pain,the anxiety,Neath that snake skin which protects so well that human flesh,I can reach that tender heart through this amazing verse.The poet and pem added to my favorites ten plus : ).

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/6/2014 1:25:00 AM

Sorry for typo darn!! Poem not pem.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/5/2014 6:00:00 PM

This is really good. Now you will be like brand new. Great work. Have a blessed day... Lucilla

Jslambert Mister Roboto
Date: 11/4/2014 1:10:00 AM

Oh my Lucy! You are missed. My fighter girl! Lucy is really now in the SKY WITH DIAMONDS! I get a little sad sometimes about ya' then I look at your picture! GOLDEN! Miss you babe! much LOVE!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/5/2014 2:47:00 PM

One of your best poems, JS. Really enjoyed it. My favourite. Thanks for sharing! :-)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/5/2014 2:36:00 PM

Keep shedding that unwanted skin revealing a new you....excellent my friend a 7 rating and a fav.....cheers