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S-Eason O-F S-Urrender

i’m a leaf crisp and plaid f l o a t i n g i n s p a c e w h e r e w i l l i l a n d f I N d m E 11/12/2019

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Date: 11/12/2019 11:28:00 AM
Lovely playful poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2019 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, Line! Very windy here today!
Date: 11/12/2019 10:12:00 AM
Not only the leaf but you lost me as well on this one. I know I am missing something here. I will study it further.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/12/2019 11:58:00 AM
I know that feeling. : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2019 11:47:00 AM
No further hidden message...just emphasis of looking for something...someone...in this season of life. Plus when you reach a certain age life feels like...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/12/2019 11:28:00 AM
I did but can't figure out why the I,N and E are capitalized in fINd mE.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2019 11:13:00 AM
Did you notice the title SOS? Surrender? Perhaps... ;)

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