Ryan's Living in the Past

      
        
          Ryan found himself living in the past
          At eighty, how much longer would he last
              Then Ryan met some pixies
              Whisked him off to the sixties
          Where old Ryan spent his time passing gas
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 7:15 PM
Poor gassy Ryan!
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October 8, 2026 at 4:49 PM
😂
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 7:39 PM
Ryan had a monocle - so he was both gassy eyed AND glassy eyed. ... A little humor there. (Very little?!) lol. :) gw
Freie Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 6:46 PM
Alas, Brother Wolf, you don't know my name, but you know my shame! "Oh, Father! How embarrassing!" Augie Doggie should respect his "Doggie Daddy!" Don't rattle my canines boy!...I'm flatulent. "Oh, FATHER!"
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 8:24 PM
You crack me up Randy! Thanks for the laughs. ~ gw
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 2:59 PM
Oh dear, lol!!
Empress Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 12:19 PM
I hope i wont meet Ryan 🤦‍♀️ cus of the last line especially haha Love your use of pixies I used pixie in my last poem too but its so very different! Brilliant lines as always and rhymes are on point 👏🏻 Sending you light 🍃
DiMino Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 9:51 AM
Some good tunes on those burners though. Good one, Gershon.
Rolland Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 5:57 AM
delicious and metaphorical, quiet inspiring poem appreciated
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 9:12 PM
Yann, your comments inspire me every time! TYSM, Gershon
Bianco Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 11:20 PM
Good one Gershon, How did you know my real name is Ryan. God bless Anthony
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 9:08 PM
It's the 49.9% female side of me that intuits these things. ~ Moo E. Macho
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