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Rusty Old Tin

Like the old rusty tin
On a run down barn
I felt like my time was spent
And I didn’t need to wonder
About fresh ideas 
Or new adventures

Time had taken it’s toll
I was living proof
That everything grows old

Like a flower dying down
Losing petals, withering
I felt my heart melting
Into the memories
Of feelings long past

It was such a shock to me
When I met this man
The man of my dreams
And he brought to me
A fresh hope, a new thought
Ideas and inspirations
That I had so often sought

Time had taken it’s toll
But finally I could know
Prayers were being answered
With affirmative replies
And I would eventually die
Happy and alive, thriving
On the inside

With this man by my side
I would blossom like a rose
Promising to flourish and grow

Like the old rusty tin
That sits on that run down barn
I only needed a coat of paint
To show the world that I was 
Capable of renewing my wings
Flying again, across the skies
That glitter and flicker
With warm and silent hopes

This amazing and gentle man
Brought to me
A new thought, a fresh approach
The renewal I needed
To dance through this world
With a light that shines so bright
It glimmers love
Into the weary soul

I love this man
And am so thankful
To be holding his hand
Through this life
And on through eternity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 7:01 PM
I love it that you extended the hand holding throughout eternity.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Hello regina, you have created such a lovely romantic poem. I enjoyed it. enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 8:14 AM
How pleasant to find the man of your dreams. ~~
Seeker Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 4:21 AM
The man would be equally thankful, I’m sure! Enjoyed this immensely!
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