Rustling In the Leaves

rustling in the leaves acorns wearing little caps carpeting the ground >center>

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2014 10:14:00 PM

this is short and sweet! congrats on your win, barbara.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/19/2014 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Barbara.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/18/2014 9:41:00 AM

Truly Barbara,yours is always a tutorial to others; ccongrats on your win...huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2014 1:48:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/4/2014 3:51:00 PM

The rustling leaves playing with the acorns on the ground, remind me of little kids playing together. A great, Haiku, Barbara.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/4/2014 6:58:00 AM

Another lovely haiku Barbara! Loved much!

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/3/2014 3:28:00 PM

Hey this was cute! my daughter has to collect acorns whenever we find them. would be cute to draw little faces on them to go with their hats. Hope your doing well bg :) smile

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2014 3:24:00 PM

so cute to picture them as if small children in their little hats!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/3/2014 11:05:00 AM

- A beautiful picture I see - thanks Barbara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/3/2014 10:31:00 AM

wonderful autumnal poem Barbara- great imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

Date: 11/3/2014 9:21:00 AM

How true . . . I swept the sidewalk yesterday and this morning the acorns are back and a heedless squire! I liked the way to described the acorns -- "little caps" all the best.