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Rusted Nail

Today, upon the ground, I found a rusted nail. Red and yellowed since its use, It was caked and swollen; cracked lines top to bottom With one turn in its body where last it was removed. And the head was tilted slightly from a blow Received when it was first employed and put to use. I pondered of the purpose it had served And the structure it had helped to hold and form. I recognized its shape having spent many days With hammer in my hand and blueprint in mind. I have straightened many that were pulled and bent And drove them to serve purpose. Once this nail had value and function was providence. Now, it fills a wrinkle of my palm And leads me to wonder…. What will someday become of me? Will a member of the generation born this day Look upon me and speculate my past, And weigh my usefulness against my keep? Will I present as bent? And, will the balding gray and shortened step Persuade them I have passed my day of worth? Or, will they look about their world And see what I have made? So much from just one rusted nail. 4th place in "Darn I Wish I Wrote This" on 6-26-12

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Date: 6/12/2015 1:07:00 AM
Hi Ray, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 3/27/2014 11:46:00 AM
Ray, Congratulations, on your own favorite poem. Stay Xool *xox* Forever LINDA
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Date: 3/22/2014 3:49:00 PM
ahhh, one of those poems we use again and again in these kinds of contests. And why NOT??? They deserve it, just like this one. Congrats on this one, Ray. profound it is.
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Date: 3/21/2014 8:36:00 PM
interesting ponderings, Ray. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/21/2014 3:27:00 PM
This poem too reminds me of the rusty nail; being brought back to attention has served a good purpose. Congrats on win. // paul
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:23:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your best and favorite poem. Congrats on the win, ray
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Date: 12/25/2013 11:26:00 PM
I see many poets are using the poems from that similar contest a few years back. WAY to go in this one, Ray. A well deserved win.(and hope you had a great xmas)
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Date: 12/24/2013 12:12:00 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win,Ray
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Date: 12/23/2013 11:52:00 PM
A highly philosophical write..enjoyed very much the way you worked your way from a rusted nail, Congrats on your win..thnx for your presence in mine, friend!!
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Date: 12/23/2013 12:43:00 PM
Congrats Ray on your fantastic win! This one was so amazing. Found this piece simply overwhelming! Thank you so much for your participation. Best wishes,, gautami
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Date: 5/8/2013 3:56:00 PM
a nail biter, and a poem I must read again. very unique... xox~ Linda
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Date: 9/5/2012 10:34:00 PM
You won in a contest with this entry? I'm not surprised. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/7/2012 8:05:00 PM
lovely this makes one ponder what will be!
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:21:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest Ray. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 11:33:00 AM
Excellent poetry here Ray!Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 2:20:00 AM
Ray congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:49:00 PM
wonderfully reflective, and I can't ever think of you as just a rusted nail! Congrats for your win with this beauty.
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:30:00 AM
Hi Ray! This was a poem that also got me thinking so much, and it also reminded me of just how there's so much to learn from everyday things-- I love how you took a rusted nail and gleaned so much from it-- Thank you so much for entering this thought provoking piece, I truly enjoyed reading this! Super congrats on your win :D!
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:59:00 AM
Thank You Nikko, For providing a playground for thought. RAY
Date: 5/31/2012 12:33:00 PM
this nailed me to my seat,great write
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Date: 6/1/2012 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I'm trying retirement but I think I'll look for more work. And meanwhile, I'll write another book and a few lines of poeTry.
Date: 5/31/2012 12:03:00 PM
....you know - a feather can be a whole chicken... - Well written poem, I like it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/1/2012 8:48:00 AM
Thanks, I like to mix figurative and literal language. And yes, this one was personal. With time, I'll see the chicken!
Date: 5/5/2012 1:39:00 AM
This piece wakes striking thoughts, it refurbishes dreams. Every man must work to leave inspiring legacy.
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Ray Dillard
Date: 6/1/2012 8:55:00 AM
Onye, I can look around and see the lives I've touched as a teacher and principal. My first students turned 54 this year. I smile at their faces Young and Old. I hope your life leaves you with the same feeling! RAY
Date: 5/1/2012 8:02:00 PM
To have a purpose is to fit, the rusty nail has gave its all, it left its mark more than a bit, your introspect has built its wall, well done ol mate, be walking tall....
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Ray Dillard
Date: 6/1/2012 8:59:00 AM
Thank You Don, for your nicely written poetic interpretation of my work. You sum it up very well! Thanks, RAY
Date: 5/1/2012 5:21:00 PM
This poem makes you say "ohhh" and makes you think. Awesome.
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Ray Dillard
Date: 5/1/2012 5:28:00 PM
Thanks Toguyen. I contemplate retirement daily. 36 years as a teacher and I don't know what I want to be next! RAY

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