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Rusted and Busted Forgotten Old Friend

Facial expressions change Obscenities silently uttered Reliving growing pains Goosebumps cause me to shudder Outlaws back in the day Together we made quite a pair Two classics finding our way Enslaved by time's cunning snare Neither of us in control Odometers disconnected Losing value ever so slow Disproportionately rejected Funny how it all worked out Realizing what has become Indifference shadowed with doubts Each, decayed by the sun Nostalgia momentarily revealed Destined to rot in a field an original poem by Daniel Turner

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/29/2016 5:44:00 AM

Sad but effective, congrats.

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/29/2016 9:03:00 AM

Thank you Richard. I appreciate the visit and the flowers.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/29/2016 5:11:00 AM

Greetings Daniel. Congrats for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/29/2016 5:10:00 AM

Greetings Daniel. Congrats for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/29/2016 5:35:00 AM

Thank you Teddy my friend. I appreciate the greetings and the kudos.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/29/2016 2:59:00 AM

This one is really nice:) Short and sweet:) Congratulations on a superb win, Daniel:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/29/2016 4:54:00 AM

Thank you Jo. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your support and kind words.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/27/2016 5:54:00 PM

Daniel, congratulations you on your wonderful win! Wonderful write ! Hugs Eve

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/27/2016 6:18:00 PM

Thank you Mrs Eve. I appreciate the friendly visit and kind comments.

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/27/2016 3:06:00 PM

A great Acrostic, Daniel. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/27/2016 6:17:00 PM

Thank you Mrs Sandra. I appreciate the flowers.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/27/2016 2:27:00 PM

Definitely reliving growing pains, is often what we do in thinking about places we've lived, things we've done, and even old cars we have owned. Loved this one !!! Well done!

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/27/2016 6:16:00 PM

Thank you Carrie. I appreciate the visit and the insightful comments.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/27/2016 10:29:00 AM

Lines like "neither of us in control" "disproportionately rejected" knowing it is about a car but feeling like it is more there is a lot of hints of feeling with memories and history left only to rot in a field. grats on driving into my winners list.

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/27/2016 6:15:00 PM

Thank you for letting me participate in your contest, Casarah, and for giving recognition to my submission.

Jean Murray

Date: 6/18/2016 8:17:00 PM

You were not forgotten old friend. So lovely to have you back enriching us with your words.

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/18/2016 8:50:00 PM

Thank you my lovely Irish lass. I've been reading a little too. I'm a long way from 100% but it is good to be able to read and write a little. I'm glad you like my acrostic. Your visits always cheer me up!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2016 8:11:00 PM

wow, the last line is so powerful. Poor thing destined to rot in a field. Very well crafted, Daniel. Good luck in the contest.

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/18/2016 8:47:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I haven't done one in a while. I appreciate your kind comments and friendly visits.