Rush of Wings

Rush of Wings

Awakened at night.
Shade darkened room.
Vivid black, devoid of 
color and shape and sound.

Populated by dreams
and lighted only by the
white stick figures on 
the beside alarm clock.

To that darkened void
arrives the rush of wings,
coming from nowhere
to surround the room.

The sound of squall rain 
falling on the shake roof.
Then silence, and dreams return,
as the rush of wings sound of rain
is blown away by the wind.   

David Holmes
May 5, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Radice Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 12:57 PM
Back to say congratulations on a very deserved win. Cheers - Gary
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 2:36 AM
I enjoyed this masterful poem David. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings, Connie
Radice Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 1:19 PM
You've created a wonderful atmosphere with your words here David, capturing and describing an eerie moment in time. This is without doubt one of the best poems I've read for some time on Poetry Soup. You've taken, what appears to be a simple idea and then taken it to another place. I really enjoy reading your work.
Holmes Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Dear Gary, my goodness, thank you so much for this amazing comment, I just posted this on the contest "What's In A Title" I really appreciate all the wonderful comments you have made on so many of my poems. And interestingly, I just saw that you won 1st place with "All The Young Hymns" - Congratulations - it is a very creative couplet - you have done many wonderful couplets, a very creative and difficult style - which I have not mastered. Thank you again Gary, it means a lot to get these comments from you. David
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