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Rush of Passion

Beats on path of heart
Dreaming of a romance rose
Soft melodic hums.
There won't be knocks on your door
Rush of passion grips your core!

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/11/2019 12:28:00 AM

You are a true romantic my friend and your poems are blessed with your love. Each one of them is a true work of art, a masterpiece that you achieve every time you put pen to paper Well done, Blessing and hugs soul sister, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 2/23/2019 3:21:00 AM

Every word is an expression of Love.. stand .. flair.. a poetic rendition that humbly translates some of the feelings that reside into a soul on constant quest.. Jenny, a pleasure to read your profound and praising words.. I highly appreciate and cherish.. love and hugs.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/9/2018 4:01:00 PM

Romance and passion enwrap the heart and tickle the imagination, Besma. So much expressed in a few lines! Regards & blessings // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/10/2018 10:59:00 AM

That's the essence of a refreshed and a refreshing life! Your visits and feedbacks are always an honour and a delight! Thank you so much Paul. Best regards. Stay safe and blessed always.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/23/2018 9:23:00 AM

So nice to find such an inspiring and brilliant jewel this fine morn my friend... Another fav for me to add to my list..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/23/2018 9:42:00 AM

A great pleasure to greet you on my page! A poet and a soul of value definitely adds a lot of beauty to those who are on his path of life and poetry.. I do appreciate your rewarding feedback Robert. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.

Elaine George

Date: 6/22/2018 9:50:00 AM

A wonderful Tanka, dear Besma. Sincerely,Elaine

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/22/2018 12:53:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Elaine for stopping by and for spilling a rewarding heartfelt feedback! Deeply honoured. Stay safe and blessed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2018 9:31:00 AM

Very nice, Besma. Have I met you before? If not, it is great to meet a new poet here.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/22/2018 12:51:00 PM

Nice to see you on path of poetry dear Andrea! Thank you for your gracious visit and lovely feedback. Stay safe and blessed.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/21/2018 9:39:00 PM

Besma, very well done Tanka with a romantic theme.. love it Hugs Eve ~' *

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/22/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve! Deeply elated and honoured by your visit and appreciative feedback! My pleasure.. Stay safe and blessed.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/21/2018 4:41:00 PM

This is an excellent, emotive Tanka, dear Besma. We all live in the hope that love will come knocking on our door. Blessed are those who hear love knocking and answer the call! Hugs and blessings. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/22/2018 12:46:00 PM

Always a great delight to see you dear Pandita and to read your lovely and heartfelt feedback. Thank you so much. Stay safe always.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/21/2018 2:35:00 AM

Nicely done Besma...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/22/2018 12:44:00 PM

My pleasure Pashang! Thank you so much! Deeply humbled.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/20/2018 8:09:00 AM

I enjoyed this passionate piece.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/20/2018 10:41:00 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed my write. My honour and delight. Thank you so much Richard for your uplifting visit. Stay safe and blessed.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/19/2018 9:25:00 AM

It s a really beautiful and delicate write, a joy to read,

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/20/2018 10:25:00 AM

I'm happy that you liked and enjoyed my write! Thank you so much Faraz for your kind words. My delight. Stay safe and blessed.

Silent One

Date: 6/19/2018 7:17:00 AM

Such beautiful lines Besma.. A very good tanka..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/20/2018 10:22:00 AM

So much elated and humbled by your visit Silent One.. Thank you so much for your lovely and appreciative feedback. Stay safe and blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/19/2018 6:50:00 AM

Today I posted at FB a rose from my roof garden entitled " Passion of the Heart! " Your marvelous romantic poem fits perfectly to the image of my rose and the rose fits perfectly to to your marvelous poem!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/20/2018 10:20:00 AM

Life without passion is an uprooted rose.. a heart with no motion.. Let it be a garden full of blooming roses.. a heart dripping with love an ocean.. Thank you so much dear Demetrios for your unique feedback! Stay safe and blessed.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/19/2018 6:21:00 AM

A romantically inclined expression of love...beautifully expressed in your tanka...love & light...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/20/2018 10:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Winged Warrior for stopping by and spilling such a praising feedback. My pleasure. Stay blessed.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/18/2018 8:18:00 PM

Dear Besma, only a romantic poetess whose beautiful heart beats of love and is in possession of a heartfelt pulse that races with passion could write such an exquisite and delicate poem of wondrous ecstatic emotions. Your pen overflows with passionate ink which blooms in a romance rose. Such a glorious celebration of love my wonderful friend.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/20/2018 10:02:00 AM

Too much on my humble soul dear Susan.. Your warmhearted and kind words are more than rewarding to my write.. I deeply appreciate your generous visit that fills me up with great pleasure.. your presence on my page adds a lot of value to my write.. Thank you so much dear friend. Stay safe and blessed.