Rush of Passion

Beats on path of heart
Dreaming of a romance rose
Soft melodic hums.
There won't be knocks on your door
Rush of passion grips your core!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Proxenos Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 12:28 AM
You are a true romantic my friend and your poems are blessed with your love. Each one of them is a true work of art, a masterpiece that you achieve every time you put pen to paper Well done, Blessing and hugs soul sister, Jennifer.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 3:21 AM
Every word is an expression of Love.. stand .. flair.. a poetic rendition that humbly translates some of the feelings that reside into a soul on constant quest.. Jenny, a pleasure to read your profound and praising words.. I highly appreciate and cherish.. love and hugs.
Callus Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Romance and passion enwrap the heart and tickle the imagination, Besma. So much expressed in a few lines! Regards & blessings // paul
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 10:59 AM
That's the essence of a refreshed and a refreshing life! Your visits and feedbacks are always an honour and a delight! Thank you so much Paul. Best regards. Stay safe and blessed always.
Lindley Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 9:23 AM
So nice to find such an inspiring and brilliant jewel this fine morn my friend... Another fav for me to add to my list..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 9:42 AM
A great pleasure to greet you on my page! A poet and a soul of value definitely adds a lot of beauty to those who are on his path of life and poetry.. I do appreciate your rewarding feedback Robert. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.
George   Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 9:50 AM
A wonderful Tanka, dear Besma. Sincerely,Elaine
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Thank you so much dear Elaine for stopping by and for spilling a rewarding heartfelt feedback! Deeply honoured. Stay safe and blessed.
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Very nice, Besma. Have I met you before? If not, it is great to meet a new poet here.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Nice to see you on path of poetry dear Andrea! Thank you for your gracious visit and lovely feedback. Stay safe and blessed.
Roper Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 9:39 PM
Besma, very well done Tanka with a romantic theme.. love it Hugs Eve ~' *
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Thank you so much Eve! Deeply elated and honoured by your visit and appreciative feedback! My pleasure.. Stay safe and blessed.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 4:41 PM
This is an excellent, emotive Tanka, dear Besma. We all live in the hope that love will come knocking on our door. Blessed are those who hear love knocking and answer the call! Hugs and blessings. Pandita
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 12:46 PM
Always a great delight to see you dear Pandita and to read your lovely and heartfelt feedback. Thank you so much. Stay safe always.
Salehi Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 2:35 AM
Nicely done Besma...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 12:44 PM
My pleasure Pashang! Thank you so much! Deeply humbled.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 8:09 AM
I enjoyed this passionate piece.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 10:41 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed my write. My honour and delight. Thank you so much Richard for your uplifting visit. Stay safe and blessed.
Ajmal Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 9:25 AM
It s a really beautiful and delicate write, a joy to read,
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 10:25 AM
I'm happy that you liked and enjoyed my write! Thank you so much Faraz for your kind words. My delight. Stay safe and blessed.
One Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Such beautiful lines Besma.. A very good tanka..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 10:22 AM
So much elated and humbled by your visit Silent One.. Thank you so much for your lovely and appreciative feedback. Stay safe and blessed.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Today I posted at FB a rose from my roof garden entitled " Passion of the Heart! " Your marvelous romantic poem fits perfectly to the image of my rose and the rose fits perfectly to to your marvelous poem!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Life without passion is an uprooted rose.. a heart with no motion.. Let it be a garden full of blooming roses.. a heart dripping with love an ocean.. Thank you so much dear Demetrios for your unique feedback! Stay safe and blessed.
Warrior Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 6:21 AM
A romantically inclined expression of love...beautifully expressed in your tanka...love & light...^WW^
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Thank you so much Winged Warrior for stopping by and spilling such a praising feedback. My pleasure. Stay blessed.
Ashley Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Dear Besma, only a romantic poetess whose beautiful heart beats of love and is in possession of a heartfelt pulse that races with passion could write such an exquisite and delicate poem of wondrous ecstatic emotions. Your pen overflows with passionate ink which blooms in a romance rose. Such a glorious celebration of love my wonderful friend.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Too much on my humble soul dear Susan.. Your warmhearted and kind words are more than rewarding to my write.. I deeply appreciate your generous visit that fills me up with great pleasure.. your presence on my page adds a lot of value to my write.. Thank you so much dear friend. Stay safe and blessed.
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June 18, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Excellent poem Besma..delicate, passionate, romantic in every way..well written, Tanka.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Thank you so much dear Vijay.. I'm glad you enjoyed my write. Stay safe.
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