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Into the Hexaline Groove Poetry Contest

Posted 5/5/25

Sponsor Nette Onclaud

Rush Hour traffic is stop and go horns honking like mad geese windows down in the heat choice words said in anger social fingers signal suddenly my lane clears

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Date: 5/10/2025 7:31:00 AM
Congrats!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/10/2025 1:04:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 5/5/2025 7:19:00 PM
Great work! mad geese…social fingers
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/5/2025 8:04:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 5/5/2025 5:57:00 PM
Thanks for the laugh...you make Nette's new form look easy.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/5/2025 6:16:00 PM
You are welcome John but it wasn't easy to write.

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