Rush Hour

The morning has no narrative
to be deciphered.
The grey sky is simply grey
and the sounds reaching the ear
carry no meaning, just 
the noise of machines
and motor cars. Even nature
gives no eloquent speech
but allows each utterance to fight 
for space or privilege with cries
and discordant howls.

Clumps of people spill
from carriages and clog
bus stops with minds 
wired to worlds
squeezed through the window
of a tiny screen. 
The morning tightens 
and presses something
deeper into itself,
becoming smaller,
more difficult to reach.
Mouthfuls of panic hurry past,
unnoticed,
before being swallowed 
by automatic doors.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Boles Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 12:56 PM
The reality of how life has evolved on our planet. Technology has muffled the true beauty of simple sound and movement, replaced by the hectic, buzzing sounds of negativity and peril. Your poem's scenarios really aroused my senses! An evocative write...ab
Willason Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 3:33 PM
Thankyou, Anselemo, for your comments. Pleased that something in this poem resonated with your own feelings. Good to know of the connection. Regards, Paul
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