Get Your Premium Membership

Running On Fumes

When I go to buy gas, My teeth I want to gnash, And I curse 'neath my breath, And want to choke the hose! Save room at the poor house; I am gonna need it! Gas is awful high. Four bucks a gallon! A loan from the bank. Might help somewhat to, Fill my empty tank! Those crude cartels, Control each drop. And what is worse, They drain my purse! Help Congress! Off your duffs! Ease my plight! My car Gasps for Gas! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 8 in David Williams' "Diminished Hexaverse" Contest - June 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/24/2012 9:49:00 PM
my kind of poetry, bob... salute and congrats with huggs! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2012 9:40:00 AM
I have a Prius! God bless Japanese inginuity!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2012 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2012 2:53:00 AM
Ha! Don't we all wish for reduced gas prices! Well put Robert and congrats on your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 6:42:00 PM
Sounds very cheap compared to our pump prices Bob but congratulations on your winning spot xx
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 3:35:00 PM
Great idea and win..Congrats on winning..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 11:37:00 AM
BOB H.,~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,pd
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 11:08:00 AM
Bob, I could almost see you seething at the pumps, thanks for entering and well done...David
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 9:01:00 AM
Yep, yep the damn gas price!!! A very good subject you picked Bob...liked it. If I was the judge I'd have placed your poem higher on the list. Big congrats on your win though!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 8:01:00 AM
Yours has a really awesome ending! Congrats on your funny poem. (well, it's not really funny what we pay for gas, but you get my meaning)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 2:54:00 AM
Congrats, Bob, on the win..love this topical and attractive piece..:) Jag
Login to Reply
Date: 6/19/2012 8:04:00 PM
Time we get gas powered bikes. I've been looking at them and am impressed. Another thing Bob, there a companies that aren't fromthe middle east we can buy from so boyfcotting could be a big voice if everyone was together on it. I sense some desperation in this one!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/19/2012 8:47:00 AM
moving to the arctic for dogs and a sled. broke
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2012 2:15:00 PM
Love the flow of this Diminished Hexaverse..good luck in the contest!!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2012 1:42:00 PM
What a delightful write you have written my friend! I really enjoyed your description of the plight for gas that we all encounter seemingly every day! You wrote this poem so fluidly and making the lines easy to read! It's a pleasant write to read Bob! Outstanding poem! Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2012 12:48:00 PM
I'm certain you're serious about this because you have mentioned this lightly before in another one of your poems HAHA so this solidifies your angst as genuine. 16 cents is an improvement but most definitely isn't a drastic drop to me, by the way. Didn't even notice it was a diminished hexaverse until I got to the bottom so you did an exceptionally good job keeping a natural flow. Good luck in the contest, Bob <3
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2012 12:23:00 PM
Bob, if you have been to the pumps within the last three weeks, you'll see that the prices have dropped drastically. I have a feeling they won't stay there very long. Good example of a diminished hexaverse.
Login to Reply