Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

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Just a fictional poem. lol...

Running Naked

(free style) 


I left my pants somewhere 
I can't seem to find them anywhere. 
I have looked every place I know 
Everywhere high and low 

But still I can't find them 
This are my special pants 
They're not the best looking ones 
They're not the kind to flaunt around 

Yet I don't worry if they look that bad 
I still like my old comfortable pants 
I also own a pair of worn out t-shirts 
That they match this old pants I want 

So I better keep searching for my pants 
If I can't find them soon I'll be very mad 
Cos I need them immediately very bad 
So I don't have to run naked all thru the house. 


 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014 


09.28. 2014 

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Tim Smith September 29, 2014 at 5:14 PM lol....pants are overrated....I walk around in just a pair of comfortable nylon shorts....hugs Tim Dorian Petersen Potter September 29, 2014 at 7:00 PM Right now am wearing shorts, Tim, is very hot still here in Miami after all that rain early this afternoon, and still hasn't let up.lol. Hate the humidity the most. Thanks for your visit and comments. Lol... God bless youa, hugs! xxx D.

Paul Callus September 29, 2014 at 9:49 AM Now this has put a smile on my face:) Are you sure the ants did not get at your pants? Wonder if you've found them yet! // paul Dorian Petersen Potter September 29, 2014 at 4:23 PM talking about pants, yes I found them right where I always keep them.... In my closet... But the reason I missed them before is because they fell from the hanger and were on the floor...all the time buried between the rug and some shopping bags with stuff. You're so funny Paul! Thank you for dropping by and making smile a lot with you kind and funny comments. Cheers! Love and Light! Xxxx D.

Sharon Gulley September 28, 2014 at 5:00 PM Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha, this is so cute. I really like this one Dorian....Sharon G. Sharon Gulley September 29, 2014 at 9:14 PM Hey I live in Jacksonville, so I understand the heat and rain completely, then Tim wonders why we always write about rain, ha ha ha. Glad you found your pants and have a wonderful evening...Sharon G. Dorian Petersen Potter September 29, 2014 at 4:15 PM Thank you Sharon! So glad you did. Lol....have a safe week! And don't lose your pants...hahaha. love and light! Hugs! Xxxx D