Running Naked

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Just a fictional poem. lol...

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free style) I left my pants somewhere I can't seem to find them anywhere. I have looked every place I know Everywhere high and low But still I can't find them This are my special pants They're not the best looking ones They're not the kind to flaunt around Yet I don't worry if they look that bad I still like my old comfortable pants I also own a pair of worn out t-shirts That they match this old pants I want So I better keep searching for my pants If I can't find them soon I'll be very mad Cos I need them immediately very bad So I don't have to run naked all thru the house. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 09.28. 2014

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Date: 9/29/2014 5:14:00 PM
lol....pants are overrated....I walk around in just a pair of comfortable nylon shorts....hugs Tim
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/29/2014 7:00:00 PM
Right now am wearing shorts, Tim, is very hot still here in Miami after all that rain early this afternoon, and still hasn't let up.lol. Hate the humidity the most. Thanks for your visit and comments. Lol... God bless youa, hugs! xxx D.
Date: 9/29/2014 9:49:00 AM
Now this has put a smile on my face:) Are you sure the ants did not get at your pants? Wonder if you've found them yet! // paul
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Date: 9/29/2014 4:23:00 PM
talking about pants, yes I found them right where I always keep them.... In my closet... But the reason I missed them before is because they fell from the hanger and were on the floor...all the time buried between the rug and some shopping bags with stuff. You're so funny Paul! Thank you for dropping by and making smile a lot with you kind and funny comments. Cheers! Love and Light! Xxxx D.
Date: 9/28/2014 5:00:00 PM
Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha, this is so cute. I really like this one Dorian....Sharon G.
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 9/29/2014 9:14:00 PM
Hey I live in Jacksonville, so I understand the heat and rain completely, then Tim wonders why we always write about rain, ha ha ha. Glad you found your pants and have a wonderful evening...Sharon G.
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Date: 9/29/2014 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Sharon! So glad you did. Lol....have a safe week! And don't lose your pants...hahaha. love and light! Hugs! Xxxx D
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