Runners "low"

Tying my shoes ($$) for my morning run,
I think about quitting, I wish it were done.

Perhaps if I run at least a mile each way,
I won’t have to cry at what the scales say.

My breath comes in gasps, I look a freight,
The people I pass must laugh at my plight.

I would love to feel the wind in my face,
To do that though, I’d have to pick up the pace.

A few strides taken, my back starts to ache,
My joints are stiff, damn, give me a break.

Where is the euphoria I’m supposed to feel?
The “runners high” they say is part of the deal.

It never gets easier, a form of torture each time…
But hearing “way to go grandma!” is really sublime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/15/2009 6:56:00 AM
I know the feeling and am experiencing the torture myself. However, I just keep moving along. This piece flow very well and is right on point. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/14/2009 11:58:00 PM
Nice one BG keep going.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome observations.
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Date: 5/14/2009 7:26:00 PM
I too, go out every morning....and some mornings...I think..nahhh, no way, Jose' ....but then, guilt sets in and off I go...usually no regrets later, but this ol girl huffs and puffs too...so I hear you in this poem!!
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Date: 5/14/2009 8:41:00 AM
Can't stop laughing after reading the last line, Barbara! It does take a good bit of effort to force ourselves to exercise. I have a nightly routine that I sometimes wish to forget. Once I get going, though, I feel better afterward. Maybe your "runners' high" is just elusive right now, but your swimsuit will thank you this summer. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2009 6:45:00 AM
~lol~ OMG this is too funny. Though I do not know what I am laughing at! I used to treadmill 30-45 mins a day (still never got the runners high) but I have been so bad and not on for maybe 2 months! This is totally hilarious!!! Thanks for sharing. I am not alone!!! Love, Shar xoxo
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Date: 5/14/2009 2:02:00 AM
lol I HATE (and I really mean that from the bottom of my very soul) running. hate it. I'd much rather do about anything else (well...except arobics - hate that too!) give me a hike, walk, a jump on the tramp - a ything but those anyday of the week! lol guess that's why I still have 15 lbs to lose! lol love, Kristin
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Date: 5/13/2009 9:15:00 PM
Barbara this is hilarious it describes me and my wife to a tee especially the fourth stanza. You must have been hiding in the bushes when we came by. This one is definitely going in my favs. God Bless. Ron Thanks for the smile
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