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Rundown

“In a rundown, the runner is in a pickle that could become a rhubarb.” ~ by poet Rundown. He's trapped between bases being pursued by the fielders who glibly smile because they know they have the advantage, to perhaps overtake and tag the beleaguered runner, to foil the run. Rundown.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2024 1:47:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this one with us. I am not sure about this game so not quite sure about my understanding, but it was fun to read. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by. Sara K

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/24/2024 1:08:00 PM

Perhaps.?? A longer version of if ? Everything Depends.? To situations there are no ends, in A diamond race to run..Don't lose sight of the Fun..' Although I am feeling a little deflated.' I Thought to make the effort, to try to be elated.? Now it seems my, initiative is too belated..' lol)) Enjoyed reading this Linda-Alice.'

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/20/2024 8:43:00 AM

Run, run don't give up. Concentrate. You will overcome.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/21/2024 2:56:00 PM

Thank you Victor. Hugs :)

Bill Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 8:42:00 PM

Well written to form, Linda, and an interesting subject to us baseball fans. I like your personal quote also. WTG. Have a great week, neighbor! Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/20/2024 7:07:00 AM

TYSM dear neighbor! A verse that has limited audience appeal, but fun to write. Make it a great Day! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 3:34:00 PM

well done, Linda. Wasn't familiar with this form of poetry; after having read about it, you've done a marvelous job. The rundown happens when running competitively. I can't tell you how many times a runner behind me in the final stretch would get right behind me...to frustrate me and take away my focus. Only took once for me to be 'rundown' to understand why the practice happened. Rambling. sigh. Have a lovely evening, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/20/2024 7:03:00 AM

Hi Sara. It's all competitive and a brilliant strategy. Ramble on dear friend. Have a great Tuesday! :)