Rundown

“In a rundown, the runner is in a pickle that could become a rhubarb.” ~ by poet Rundown. He's trapped between bases being pursued by the fielders who glibly smile because they know they have the advantage, to perhaps overtake and tag the beleaguered runner, to foil the run. Rundown.
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Kendrick Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 1:47 PM
Thanks for sharing this one with us. I am not sure about this game so not quite sure about my understanding, but it was fun to read. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by. Sara K
Maverick Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Perhaps.?? A longer version of if ? Everything Depends.? To situations there are no ends, in A diamond race to run..Don't lose sight of the Fun..' Although I am feeling a little deflated.' I Thought to make the effort, to try to be elated.? Now it seems my, initiative is too belated..' lol)) Enjoyed reading this Linda-Alice.'
Buhagiar Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 8:43 AM
Run, run don't give up. Concentrate. You will overcome.
Fowler Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 2:56 PM
Thank you Victor. Hugs :)
Baker Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 8:42 PM
Well written to form, Linda, and an interesting subject to us baseball fans. I like your personal quote also. WTG. Have a great week, neighbor! Bill
Fowler Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 7:07 AM
TYSM dear neighbor! A verse that has limited audience appeal, but fun to write. Make it a great Day! :)
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