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Run Run Run

Run run run rapidly readily rigorously Reaching roads rivers railways Run run run rough remote rambling routes Realizing regret remorse remain redundant Run run run re-evaluating racing rituals Remaining respectful responsible relaxed Run run run repetitively run run run repeatedly

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/13/2014 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations on a very fine well-deserved win! I wish I could get it all together so perfectly!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/13/2014 8:52:00 AM

Welcome to the soup, drop by and visit when you have a chance.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/13/2014 12:22:00 AM

a nice run, congrats for the win. Mohan

Fate Dictates
Date: 7/13/2014 8:03:00 AM

tks new to this site and am batteling to navigate my way round!!

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/12/2014 8:51:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Fate! Hugs.. Arlene

Fate Dictates
Date: 7/13/2014 8:03:00 AM

Tks this is a nice surprise!!

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/12/2014 7:20:00 PM

Congrats on a great write ....Seren

Fate Dictates
Date: 7/13/2014 8:04:00 AM

Tks was not expecting it!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/12/2014 3:38:00 PM

Another great completely alliterated poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Fate Dictates
Date: 7/13/2014 8:04:00 AM

This is my favourite style!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/12/2014 2:35:00 PM

I love it you make me run run run..:) it's a jolly write too!! Pity too few commented!! It's one of best too that I read from the list..:) congrats my friend.:)

Fate Dictates
Date: 7/13/2014 8:05:00 AM

Tks so much: appreciate it!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2014 8:32:00 AM

One of the best, so glad to see it on Dr. Rams list. Congrats.

Fate Dictates
Date: 7/13/2014 8:06:00 AM

Tks new to this site so lost a little on how things work!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/12/2014 5:26:00 AM

Nice alliteration with rhythm, Fate. Congrats on the win in my contest

Fate Dictates
Date: 7/13/2014 8:06:00 AM

Thank you still trying to navigate my way round on this site...