Run Run Run

Run run run rapidly readily rigorously
Reaching roads rivers railways
Run run run rough remote rambling routes
Realizing regret remorse remain redundant
Run run run re-evaluating racing rituals
Remaining respectful responsible  relaxed
Run run run repetitively run run run repeatedly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on a very fine well-deserved win! I wish I could get it all together so perfectly!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:52 AM
Welcome to the soup, drop by and visit when you have a chance.
Chutani Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 12:22 AM
a nice run, congrats for the win. Mohan
Dictates Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:03 AM
tks new to this site and am batteling to navigate my way round!!
Smith Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:51 PM
Congrats on a great win, Fate! Hugs.. Arlene
Dictates Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Tks this is a nice surprise!!
Roberts Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Congrats on a great write ....Seren
Dictates Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:04 AM
Tks was not expecting it!
Johnson Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Another great completely alliterated poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Dictates Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:04 AM
This is my favourite style!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 2:35 PM
I love it you make me run run run..:) it's a jolly write too!! Pity too few commented!! It's one of best too that I read from the list..:) congrats my friend.:)
Dictates Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Tks so much: appreciate it!!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:32 AM
One of the best, so glad to see it on Dr. Rams list. Congrats.
Dictates Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Tks new to this site so lost a little on how things work!!
Mehta Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 5:26 AM
Nice alliteration with rhythm, Fate. Congrats on the win in my contest
Dictates Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Thank you still trying to navigate my way round on this site...
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