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Rumors of Unicorns

I've heard rumors of unicorns Seen only by the faithful sworn Rising in glories you foretold From valleys where oceans are born You spoke of passages in gold To take, if my vision was bold Enough to follow where you led Unquestioning, into the cold I fell for promises unsaid Surrendered to you every shred Of light and beauty I once had And to your dark delusions wed We left as sun-blinded nomads Criss crossing straight lines into plaid As I remembered what I knew Truth re-emerged, brightly unclad I could pretend that red is blue I could declare my heart stayed true I could deny the voice of doubt But I can't lie as well as you 10/09/21

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Date: 11/7/2021 3:29:00 AM
That last stanza alone would be a winner. Really well done.
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Date: 11/4/2021 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Michelle. Wonderful metaphor of the unicorn! Love your last stanza - a life choice. Blessings to you!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/4/2021 9:06:00 PM
I am so glad for your kind words, my friend, thank you very much!
Date: 11/4/2021 2:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Michelle, I really like the last stanza. John
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/4/2021 9:05:00 PM
I appreciate it, thank you John
Date: 11/3/2021 4:02:00 PM
Awesome write!!! I love it... such a exceptional poem. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/4/2021 9:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina~
Date: 11/3/2021 9:10:00 AM
Superb Michelle! every line a gem and the last stanza is brilliant! congrats on your win and could have been nearly first place!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/4/2021 9:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Krish, I appreciate it~
Date: 10/12/2021 8:24:00 PM
Hello Michelle ... a great poem indeed. The flow runs perfectly and the topic is interesting - well done Michelle - Lindsay
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Date: 10/12/2021 11:25:00 AM
I agree wholeheartedly with Harry; Michelle the saddest love-relationships are fodder for great poetry/writing. Love the closing lines (with a punch & kick, to boot). shalom shalom/Paz!
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Date: 10/11/2021 1:15:00 AM
A great form of poetry, enhance by this superb poetry.
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Date: 10/10/2021 3:36:00 PM
BRAVO! Enchanted splendor rises! Superb imagery! Inventive and inspired, straight from wizard’s lore. Love Love Love!
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Date: 10/10/2021 2:58:00 PM
Oh, this is wicked good, Michelle. Incredible crafting! Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 10/10/2021 7:01:00 AM
I like your twist on the theme. So well expressed.;0)
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Date: 10/9/2021 2:34:00 PM
Ah, some are good at it others are much too honest for that. I for one am glad I dong fudge it, you sleep better at night, Glad you stopped by, keep well, hugs xo
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Date: 10/9/2021 2:20:00 PM
Excellent rhymes and flow, Michelle. What seems unattainable perhaps is. All the best.
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Date: 10/9/2021 10:13:00 AM
Practice makes perfect! 63% of Republicans insist the GOP should not support any Republican who doubts Trump!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/9/2021 12:40:00 PM
It's not really about Republicans, but thanks for your comment~
Date: 10/9/2021 10:09:00 AM
What a gem, a fav for sure, your exceptional poetic talent shines as bright star on a dark night, you of all people , a refined poetess could never put up with a life of lies, me too! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/9/2021 12:39:00 PM
I am so touched and flattered, that means a lot coming from a talented writer like yourself! Hope you have a good weekend~
Date: 10/9/2021 8:30:00 AM
just brilliant! :-) hugs Jan xx
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/9/2021 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, Jan, appreciate it~

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