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Her first mistake while baking cakes was flavoring one with rum Her headache pounds and she found some crumbs around her chin The cake is done but she wonders now why all the rum is gone ________________________________ 3/9/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/16/2016 7:36:00 AM
Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara
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Date: 3/15/2016 5:45:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/12/2016 2:31:00 AM
Got a bit over zealous there, with the brewsky, eh? Hope it didn't get mixed up with a children's birthday cake ... then we'd REALLY be in for some trouble. Congrats on the contest. Your last stanza is the most natural sounding.
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Date: 3/11/2016 9:19:00 PM
oh I LOVE this one. Looks like it won. I am glad for that. Congrats.
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Date: 3/11/2016 7:20:00 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS, this is delightfully funny, I really enjoyed reading it, put a smile on my face, 7 ~
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Date: 3/11/2016 12:36:00 PM
LOL! All the entries are really funny... Enjoyed your cake...Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/11/2016 11:16:00 AM
Funny Carrie. A little too much rum in the rum cake, or maybe not enough. That's what she gets for not sharing.
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Date: 3/11/2016 7:39:00 AM
Hi Carrie, I enjoyed your write, well done. Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/10/2016 9:57:00 AM
These are hard! Yours is the best I've read...BG
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Date: 3/9/2016 5:55:00 PM
lol Carrie. I believe the reason is evident in your picture. She needed to wash it down with something...Nice write.
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Date: 3/9/2016 5:02:00 PM
Nice job. Thank you for sharing.
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