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Raisin said, “Let’s write a poem, Let’s try to make everything rhyme A Limerick; maybe a sonnet Let’s write it in double quick time?” Rum said, “Let me get us started, I’ll make it an everyday tale And if we write something artistic An agent might put it on sale. “We will have to keep it in memory For kittens cannot hold a pen And despite recent hype, we can’t even type So let’s limit stanzas to ten.” Those kittens sat ‘writing’ together All day and well into the night And when they were done Rum asked whether They should edit or even rewrite Raisin said, “No, I don’t think so, Let’s run through again and decide.” Her recital was ‘read’ and, nodding, Rum said “That should impress poets worldwide.” So Raisin had thoughts that were forming A plan that was worthy of note “Let’s say it aloud in the morning, So ‘Mummy’ can hear what we wrote.” At seven a.m. the alarm clock Awoke mum and dad from their rest They silenced the clock and got quite a shock As Rum gave the poem his best Well, mum and dad listened intently As their kittens recited away “I think,” said their dad, “Those kittens are mad!” For this was their poem that day…. Meow, meow, prrrr, mew, meow Prrr, mew, meow, prrr, mew……….

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Date: 2/29/2024 11:48:00 AM
Gertcha Cowson! I don’t know why that came to mind Terry, oh now I remember. This is outrageously brilliant, just like the Chas and Dave song, Rum n Raisin are reaching new poetic heights, Cheers David
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Date: 2/29/2024 3:53:00 PM
Ha ha… Thanks, David. I was struggling to come up with a new R&R adventure and also to offer up a less arduous read. Wasn’t sure it would work, but I think I got away with it.
Date: 2/28/2024 10:06:00 AM
hahaha
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Date: 2/20/2024 5:29:00 PM
Lol, They wrote a couplet!, I enjoyed the read Terry
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Date: 2/17/2024 12:33:00 PM
Way tooooo cute. When does the book come out with Rum & Raisin the authors??? Have a great day writing away........................
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Date: 2/17/2024 3:04:00 PM
Can’t believe I’ve arrived at Rum n Raisin 16, 18 if you count two specials. Can’t seem to let them go… but then why would I, when they seem to be so enjoyed. Thank you, Paula. Terry
Date: 2/16/2024 11:01:00 PM
I'm sure you must have been a stand up comedian in another life..or maybe even this one perhaps? Whatever, you've sat down and given us another treat Terry. I don't know whether you are familiar with the work of the late great Gary Larson ('The Far Side') but I can see the punchline in this being the basis of one of his cartoons. Top write. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 2/17/2024 3:01:00 PM
Always enjoyed ‘The Far Side’, Gary. I remember that one or two would go over my head, but more often I would be explaining the gag to colleagues. Can’t for the life of me recall what newspaper I used to see them in. You might gather that I’m more than happy with the comparison. Thanks muchly. Terry
Date: 2/16/2024 1:19:00 PM
This is just too cute for words dear Terry. The darling kittens and their antics are perfect for reading out loud. I keep looking at the picture of them and you write them so endearingly that you would believe they were real ( I do! ) The genius flow with all your poems are always captivating. Loved it as always. Thank you. Keep them coming my friend :):)
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Date: 2/16/2024 4:36:00 PM
Thanks, Christina. I really want to get my teeth into another in-depth mega-write… my brain cells are clunky right now, but the premise behind this little stop gap amused me. Glad you’re still enjoying R N R. Terry
Date: 2/15/2024 6:41:00 PM
ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. Great stuff!
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Date: 2/16/2024 4:33:00 PM
Glad you got the gag, GW. Of course, if you hadn’t I doubt anyone would have done ;-)
Date: 2/15/2024 5:20:00 PM
Rum and Raisin as poets...that's a fascinating concept. I guess they're finding out that writing poetry is not a simple task...thanks for your creativity this evening, Sara
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Date: 2/16/2024 4:32:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. A relatively short Rum N Raisin episode this time. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 2/15/2024 5:14:00 PM
Very clever Rum n’ Raisin are, I’d award them with a gold star. Loved it… Beryl
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Date: 2/16/2024 4:30:00 PM
Thanks, Beryl. I enjoyed working up to the cat-speak at the end because throughout the Rum N Raisin saga, few humans could understand ‘cat’. I had no idea if the gag would work or go down like a lead balloon, so I’m pleased that you enjoyed. Terry

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