Rum

The Cuba Libre, also called rum and coke is favored by many kinds of folk. To its pleasures I succumb and ne’er refrain from! Sip, savor rum. What flavor! I sing and I hum! The taste is just so awesome! I really love this drink, it’s no joke. Its praises I sing to all you gentlefolk!

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Natasha L Scragg

Date: 4/13/2024 3:09:00 PM

This is very good Jim, nothing pale about this at all! I love the way it portrays the letting go of inhibition and enjoying the merriment that people feel when their tipple relaxes them. Very good.

Jim Healey
Date: 4/13/2024 8:51:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Natasha. I guess it's not bad for a first attempt. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your poetry. Take care. J.