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Ruffling Feathers

What we do today shapes who we become later. 
We can't stand to lose this chance to offer. 
To bestow expectations and courses to cater 
Will we hope to triumph over disaster? 
Future ages will respect this avid labor. 



1st place contest winner

Written: August 11, 2021

A BRIAN STRAND 4 or 5 line Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 8/12/2021 3:23:00 AM Each day is a fresh start, we can do better. Just think of climate change..Delice Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/12/2021 8:18:00 AM Yes Delice, just keep praying, thanks for your thoughtful feedback, have a great weekend

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/12/2021 2:29:00 AM Wonder what the future will bring. Great ideas. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/12/2021 8:14:00 AM We all wonder about the same thing Victor, we need just to keep our faith. Thanks for the thoughtful feedback

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 8/11/2021 7:44:00 PM Inspiring words worth emulating. Well penned Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/12/2021 8:25:00 AM Thanks, Rama, appreciate your delightful comment

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/11/2021 10:08:00 AM Words of wisdom and words to live by Lasaad, best of luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/11/2021 11:13:00 AM Thank you so much, Tom. Your kind words are so motivating, and I appreciate your precious visit and comment: blessings, my good friend.

L Milton Hankins Date: 8/11/2021 9:35:00 AM Ah, so thought-provoking, Lasaad, and I love this kind of poetry. Everyday is a new opportunity to "become." Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/11/2021 11:15:00 AM I appreciate so much your kind words and gracious comment, dear friend Milton. Blessings and best regards.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/11/2021 8:42:00 AM Great advice, Lasaad. Many should heed it. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/11/2021 11:17:00 AM Thank you very much, Victor; your precious comment is so uplifting to me. Blessings and kindest regards, dear friend.