(Entry for the Christmas Tizzy 12 Lines or Less Poetry Contest, sponsored by Miranda Hawley, submitted December 12, 2024 - First Place)
Santa's reindeer were in preparation, training for the big occasion, getting themselves in top condition for their Christmas Eve expedition. But on this particular Christmas, Rudolph was experiencing pain and stiffness. Santa worried about his fitness and a noticeable lack of swiftness. X-rays showed Rudolph had a leg fracture, so he was temporarily put out to pasture; and seeing as the winds were rather choppy, Santa delivered presents in a flying jalopy.
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