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(Entry for the Christmas Tizzy 12 Lines or Less Poetry Contest, sponsored by Miranda Hawley, submitted December 12, 2024 - First Place)

Santa's reindeer were in preparation, training for the big occasion, getting themselves in top condition for their Christmas Eve expedition. But on this particular Christmas, Rudolph was experiencing pain and stiffness. Santa worried about his fitness and a noticeable lack of swiftness. X-rays showed Rudolph had a leg fracture, so he was temporarily put out to pasture; and seeing as the winds were rather choppy, Santa delivered presents in a flying jalopy.

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Date: 1/12/2025 7:04:00 AM
As Good as any sleigh! Congratulations on your placement! Xo
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Jim Healey
Date: 1/12/2025 8:10:00 AM
Thank you, Crystol. Nice to hear from you again. Cheers from Newfoundland. Jim
Date: 1/11/2025 8:50:00 PM
I love the fact that you have the most basic rhyme scheme, that makes it fun to read. I also love the fact that a flying jalopy was the solution to his broken leg. Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Jim Healey
Date: 1/11/2025 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Miranda. This contest was a challenge and a lot of fun. Cheers from Canada and Happy New Year. Jim
Date: 1/11/2025 3:32:00 PM
Aw poor Rudolph! This was funny and sad! Great job! Congratulations Jim!
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Jim Healey
Date: 1/11/2025 4:22:00 PM
Thanks, Karen. Take care. J

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