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Rudolph the Brown Nosed Reindeer

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Poor Rudolph his nose has turned brown His antics have made Santa frown For no one supposes That folks with brown noses Are trouble and let others down 12-06-17

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Edward Mccall

Date: 1/14/2018 2:43:00 PM

What a great limerick and a great message to go with it.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2018 2:49:00 PM

Thanks Edward:-) I have a fun poem you may enjoy called 'weather forecast' i think it may tickle your funny bone:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 12/11/2017 1:29:00 PM

Great Limerick Jan, I sang a song about Rudolph the brown nosed reindeer to my kids. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 12/11/2017 1:47:00 PM

lol I dread to think what that was like Roy lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anna Hopper

Date: 12/10/2017 1:33:00 PM

I’m dying! Lol. Excellent

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 3:24:00 PM

Lol Anna of laughter I hope!:-)hugs jan xx

Pat Adams

Date: 12/9/2017 7:05:00 PM

This is really funny Jan. I read the title and was like.......Why didn't I think of that!!!.........Seems like an obvious way to go.....Excellent write....a FAV 4 me!.........pat...........ps great cartoon too!!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/9/2017 7:09:00 PM

Thanks Pat:-) I did another poem with the same title and Roy commented about nicking the title for a limerick I don't think he ever did use it so i eventually came up with this second silly poem https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/rudolph_the_brown_nosed_reindeer_624121 :-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/7/2017 5:54:00 PM

hahaha... always a brown noser :) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2017 5:55:00 PM

Yes there is always one!:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/7/2017 1:23:00 PM

This is really good, Jan! In every place I worked in there was a brown nose or two; they stand out a mile, and people tend to talk behind their backs! // ps Hope all is well ~ Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2017 1:57:00 PM

Yes there are always a few brown nosers around Paul, i used to work with one at school - had her hand up more often than the kids when something needed doing lol:-) hugs jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 12/7/2017 12:20:00 PM

Yes, they do!! Very cute!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2017 12:27:00 PM

Hee Hee:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 12/7/2017 12:07:00 PM

haha...good one Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2017 12:15:00 PM

hee hee We all know the odd brown noser lol:-) I thought about doing a parody of Rudolph the red nosed reindeer i still may do it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/7/2017 8:58:00 AM

Can i read something more into this wondrous limerick, Jan? anyhow love it so much, you never fail with these to bring a smile to one's lips...thanks

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2017 11:51:00 AM

I started the poem a few days ago but have had a bit of a health issue recently and the muse hasn't been willing to come out to play. They are doing more investigations in the new year and I just hope they can sort me out:-) hugs jan xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/6/2017 11:52:00 PM

You are the limerick mistress, this one was soo adorable n cool. Merry xmas in advance. Thumbs up. So nice to read from your pen again. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2017 1:54:00 AM

Thanks for the comment, I will drop by:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 12/6/2017 6:40:00 PM

IN AN EFFORT TO GET THE FIRST SCOOP-ON SANTA'S CHRISTMAS EVE LOOP-HE TOOK A QUICK SNIFF-AN OLFACTORY WHIFF-STUCK HIS NOSE IN THE OTHER DEER'S POOP---sorry Jan...had to go there

John Lawless
Date: 12/7/2017 8:05:00 PM

by all means Jan...add it to the olfactory pile

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2017 1:53:00 AM

ha ha ha that is perfect John - shall I add it under my poem ... if not then make sure you post it lol:-) hugs jan xx