Rudolph and Comet Stayed Home

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This Christmas giving will be over soon,
Vixen and Cupid are over the moon;
Santa, Dasher and Dancer,
Ate baked beans with old Prancer;
and Donner and Blitzen are in a swoon.

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All details added after judging,  
Written, December 22, 2015


Poetry/Limerick/Rudolph and Comet Stayed Home
Copyright Protected, ID 15-1089-723-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, Christmas Limericks (old or new)
sponsor, Carolyn Devonshire

Third Place

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Constance La France

Date: 12/3/2018 8:42:00 AM

Jan and Charles for visiting with those great comments and congrats ~

Charles Messina

Date: 12/2/2018 8:10:00 PM

I must say, I do like my baked beans...lol Congrats on your win in the contest, Constance! :) Charlie

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2018 4:38:00 PM

very witty Constance, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/2/2018 12:06:00 PM

Your entry is even funnier now that I see the reindeer's head up against Santa's rear. Great work, Dear Heart! Competition for this contest was awesome and you did a terrific job. Thanks for supporting the contest with your witty verse. Hugs, Carolyn

Constance La France
Date: 12/2/2018 12:25:00 PM

Carolyn thanks for the fun contest and for my fine placement, so happy to be on your list of winners ~

Constance La France

Date: 11/30/2018 7:57:00 AM

Paul, thanks for visiting and for the comment, when writing this poem I was reminded of my father's French Canadian Baked Beans, his specialty, it was quite the production with a special bean pot, they were quite delicious but could be used as weapons, I would just keep away from them for obvious reasons but miss my father and his bean pot ~

Paul Callus

Date: 11/30/2018 4:43:00 AM

Did you say 'silly'? But most Limericks are silly or humorous! I enjoyed yours, though I would not want to be in place of Donner and Blitzen! gl in Carolyn's contest. Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2018 7:54:00 AM

:-)

Constance La France

Date: 11/29/2018 6:13:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for visiting my poem, have a great weekend !