Rudolph

Rudolph told Santa he was going on strike He wanted a brand new motorbike No way was he pulling Santa’s sled Christmas is cancelled – Rudolph’s staying in bed! Jan Allison 5th December 2014 Not for Contest

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2014 12:07:00 PM

I see...it's mutiny on the Sleigh! But I suppose he's got his union's backing! Like your humour, Jan. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2014 2:13:00 PM

Thanks so much as ever Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Daver Austin

Date: 12/8/2014 9:10:00 AM

We did without Rudolph when I was a kid - 75 years ago, we can survive without that traitorous beast! Gene Autry's dead, won't know the difference. Great humor. LOve, daver

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2014 10:53:00 AM

Thanks Daver:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/7/2014 3:56:00 AM

Real funny, love the image of Rudolph if he actually got it on his motorbike!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2014 5:20:00 AM

glad i made you smile Maurice - Rudolph on a Harley - what a sight to see LOL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/6/2014 3:53:00 PM

Hahaha... I don't blame Rudolph for going on strike. Love this poem Jan your or so witty. Blessings eve

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2014 4:03:00 PM

Thanks Eve I am in desperate need of humour so am trying as hard as I can :-) hugs jan xxx

John Fleming

Date: 12/6/2014 1:44:00 PM

Lol...nicely done!! :) john.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2014 1:49:00 PM

Thanks John:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 12/6/2014 1:15:00 PM

Hi Jan, This one would most likely win the contest. (I can see where you might have a dilemma, as you suggested, on which one to enter.) Great poem. Take care. Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2014 1:17:00 PM

Andrea has read it so I can't submit it anyway Earl - just need a bit of lighthearted fun at the moment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Race Benoit

Date: 12/6/2014 9:39:00 AM

Heh.Heh Good . . . Closing Christmas will save a LOT of people a LOT of money!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2014 10:59:00 AM

lol Race - I am not bothering this year - got 2 presents brought - family commitments - being with friends and family is far more important than material things:-( Hugs jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/6/2014 8:24:00 AM

Hahaha Jan ! That one cute little fun. Love XXX rajat

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2014 11:00:00 AM

Thanks Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/6/2014 8:07:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one..Rudolph must be a teenager now..Ha!!Ha!! Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2014 10:49:00 AM

thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan x

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/6/2014 1:18:00 AM

A cute clerihew, Jan! I was going to let my son read this, but he might get worried! Have a great weekend...hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2014 3:26:00 AM

Its only on the Isle of man the home of the TT races where I live Rhonda - your son needn't worry:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2014 9:06:00 PM

well, I will see this one since I know it is not for the contest. this is really cute, jan. Do keep in mind that it is better to put the name of the character at the end of line one. I am sure you probably did that in your contest entry!!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2014 3:26:00 AM

Oh I must check - am just having a bit of fun Andrea - need to smile at the moment:-) hugs jan xx

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/5/2014 7:48:00 PM

Hey I think good old Rudolph deserves to have at least one holiday off, but I believe as Christmas time comes forward he will get the spirit and come to his senses lol, great poem here Jan thanks for your comments also, cheri

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2014 3:25:00 AM

thanks Cheryl:-) Hugs jan x

Kp Nunez

Date: 12/5/2014 7:30:00 PM

LOL. Strike? What if Santa does not like? See you on Skype, or go take a hike...! Funny and witty, you never disappoint, your poems are so meaty, always breezy and zippy. Hugs! Kim Patrice :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2014 3:24:00 AM

thanks so much Kim:-) hugs jan x