Rudolph

Rudolph told Santa he was going on strike He wanted a brand new motorbike No way was he pulling Santa’s sled Christmas is cancelled – Rudolph’s staying in bed! Jan Allison 5th December 2014 Not for Contest

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Date: 12/8/2014 12:07:00 PM
I see...it's mutiny on the Sleigh! But I suppose he's got his union's backing! Like your humour, Jan. hugs // paul
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:13:00 PM
Thanks so much as ever Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/8/2014 9:10:00 AM
We did without Rudolph when I was a kid - 75 years ago, we can survive without that traitorous beast! Gene Autry's dead, won't know the difference. Great humor. LOve, daver
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Daver:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 12/7/2014 3:56:00 AM
Real funny, love the image of Rudolph if he actually got it on his motorbike!
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Date: 12/7/2014 5:20:00 AM
glad i made you smile Maurice - Rudolph on a Harley - what a sight to see LOL:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2014 3:53:00 PM
Hahaha... I don't blame Rudolph for going on strike. Love this poem Jan your or so witty. Blessings eve
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Date: 12/6/2014 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Eve I am in desperate need of humour so am trying as hard as I can :-) hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/6/2014 1:44:00 PM
Lol...nicely done!! :) john.
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Date: 12/6/2014 1:49:00 PM
Thanks John:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 12/6/2014 1:15:00 PM
Hi Jan, This one would most likely win the contest. (I can see where you might have a dilemma, as you suggested, on which one to enter.) Great poem. Take care. Earl
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Date: 12/6/2014 1:17:00 PM
Andrea has read it so I can't submit it anyway Earl - just need a bit of lighthearted fun at the moment:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2014 9:39:00 AM
Heh.Heh Good . . . Closing Christmas will save a LOT of people a LOT of money!
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:59:00 AM
lol Race - I am not bothering this year - got 2 presents brought - family commitments - being with friends and family is far more important than material things:-( Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/6/2014 8:24:00 AM
Hahaha Jan ! That one cute little fun. Love XXX rajat
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Date: 12/6/2014 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2014 8:07:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..Rudolph must be a teenager now..Ha!!Ha!! Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:49:00 AM
thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 12/6/2014 1:18:00 AM
A cute clerihew, Jan! I was going to let my son read this, but he might get worried! Have a great weekend...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/6/2014 3:26:00 AM
Its only on the Isle of man the home of the TT races where I live Rhonda - your son needn't worry:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/5/2014 9:06:00 PM
well, I will see this one since I know it is not for the contest. this is really cute, jan. Do keep in mind that it is better to put the name of the character at the end of line one. I am sure you probably did that in your contest entry!!
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Date: 12/6/2014 3:26:00 AM
Oh I must check - am just having a bit of fun Andrea - need to smile at the moment:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/5/2014 7:48:00 PM
Hey I think good old Rudolph deserves to have at least one holiday off, but I believe as Christmas time comes forward he will get the spirit and come to his senses lol, great poem here Jan thanks for your comments also, cheri
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Date: 12/6/2014 3:25:00 AM
thanks Cheryl:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 12/5/2014 7:30:00 PM
LOL. Strike? What if Santa does not like? See you on Skype, or go take a hike...! Funny and witty, you never disappoint, your poems are so meaty, always breezy and zippy. Hugs! Kim Patrice :)
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Date: 12/6/2014 3:24:00 AM
thanks so much Kim:-) hugs jan x
Date: 12/5/2014 7:01:00 PM
Who owns the whip here?
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Date: 12/6/2014 3:24:00 AM
LOL hugs jan xx
Date: 12/5/2014 4:29:00 PM
lol!.. now Rudolph's the boss... funny, wicked, jan... I like this!.. huggs
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Date: 12/5/2014 4:33:00 PM
I'm not sure whether to put this in the contest instead of my Santa one lol - I've done 4 of them nOw lol hugs jan xx
Date: 12/5/2014 2:23:00 PM
Bed is a good place to be Jan....Very funny...hugs Tim
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Date: 12/5/2014 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Tim:-) Hugs jan x
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