Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Ruby Rose

Sparkling white pearls in sun-rays gold
Adorning dew drops glint-morning arose
On silken-red aura, petals velvet unfold
Flaunting glamour of expressions bold
Exuding fragrance floral splendor chose
Luring passions heart rhythms compose
Revealing hints endearing sights disclose
In language of love, poise of ruby rose.

August 26, 2022
Eight Lines of Rhyme-Your Favorite Flower
Poetry Contest
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Ink Empress December 21, 2023 at 11:23 PM Dear vijay, you are just a natural with your way of rhymes and flow of alliterations and such exquisite wordplay. I love how descriptive it is and so many lines stood out for me in this like “ On silken-red aura, petals velvet unfold Flaunting glamour of expressions bold“ gorgeous and captivating cadence really. “ In language of love, poise of ruby rose.“ just stunning! You are so gifted. Always a pleasure reading your work. Sending you light .

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 30, 2023 at 10:46 AM Splendidly sensuous and lovely, Vijay. This is a fave. :)

Sara Kendrick September 6, 2022 at 11:58 AM Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. Sara

Harry Horsman September 5, 2022 at 5:59 PM This is so lovely Vijay. Harry

Linda Alice Fowler September 5, 2022 at 6:28 AM Back with congratulations on your win Vijay! I liked it the first time, and even more on the second read. :) Linda

Bill Baker August 31, 2022 at 1:16 PM A beauty for the contest, Vijay. Good luck my friend. Bill Vijay Pandit September 3, 2022 at 7:49 AM Thank you my good friend. You are always so kind.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2022 at 9:44 AM - Beautifully written, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit September 3, 2022 at 7:49 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate, as always.

Michael Tor August 28, 2022 at 8:20 PM Lovely Vijay. Unique and well written. I have read two magnificent poems from you today. Your level of creativity is at the very top my friend. God bless you... Vijay Pandit September 3, 2022 at 7:48 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Michael.

Linda Alice Fowler August 28, 2022 at 9:42 AM "...silken red aura..." does it for me Vijay. Just lovely in every way! Linda Vijay Pandit August 28, 2022 at 2:33 PM Thank you Linda--much appreciate.

Susan Lawrence August 28, 2022 at 6:57 AM Vijay, I can smell them fragrance from here and visualize the beauty of the Ruby Rose you have created in this lovely tribute ! Love it . Now I need to adorn my table with some of these beauties ! Best of luck in the contest . Hugs, Susan :) Vijay Pandit August 28, 2022 at 2:32 PM Many thanks for your visit and comments, Susan. Much appreciate, as always.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 28, 2022 at 4:50 AM A fabulous portrait of a rose painted by the brushes of your poetic inspiration, my dearest friend, Vijay! Blessings! Vijay Pandit August 28, 2022 at 2:32 PM So nice to hear that. Much appreciate, my friend. Many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong August 27, 2022 at 7:02 PM Your words exalt the rose to the Queen she is Vijay. This is so lovely. I lope it is a top winner in the contest. It is a fave for me. Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit August 28, 2022 at 2:31 PM Always a joy to read your kind remarks and your poems. Many thanks for your visit and comments, Connie. And special thanks for the FAVE.

Sotto Poet August 27, 2022 at 3:34 PM Vijay, your poem is like a ruby rose, dazzling in its beauty and filling the air with its fragrance! And the verses about the favorite flower shine like dew drops or white pearls caught in the golden rays of the sun. Best for a win dear friend Vijay Pandit August 28, 2022 at 2:30 PM Much appreciate, as always, your detailed insights my friend. Many thanks, Lasaad.

Andrea Dietrich August 27, 2022 at 3:02 PM I do love that ruby rose. Vijay Pandit August 28, 2022 at 2:29 PM Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.

Anitha Jayasankar August 27, 2022 at 6:56 AM Your words on your favorite flower sparkle just like the "dew drops that sparkle in golden rays of sun like white pearls"..Vijayji.. Best wishes in the contest... God bless... ~ Ani Vijay Pandit August 27, 2022 at 7:32 AM Glad you stopped by with your cheerful remarks, Ani. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Victor Buhagiar August 27, 2022 at 6:37 AM The rose will always be the symbol of love. Loved the monorhyme. Vijay Pandit August 27, 2022 at 7:32 AM You right about rose being the symbol of love. Much appreciate, Victor. Many thanks.

Michael Tor August 26, 2022 at 9:11 PM Love the imagery Vijay. Blessings my friend... Vijay Pandit August 27, 2022 at 7:31 AM Glad you liked the poem, Michael. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole August 26, 2022 at 8:41 PM "dew drops on silken-red aura petals." A beautiful image to behold indeed. Simply breathtaking. Your thoughts caress the page with such elegance and grace. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit August 27, 2022 at 7:30 AM Thank you my friend. I see your smile. Much appreciate, as always, Brandy. Many thanks.

Valsa George August 26, 2022 at 8:28 PM The title and the poem are equally alluring ! Vijay, your poem, like the ruby rose is flaunting glamour and exuding fragrance ! Vijay Pandit August 27, 2022 at 7:30 AM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Valsa. many thanks.

Deb M August 26, 2022 at 8:21 PM So beautifully described Vijay especially the last line! Debx Vijay Pandit August 27, 2022 at 7:29 AM Glad you liked the poem Deb. Always a joy to hear from you. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues August 26, 2022 at 4:58 PM Lovely descriptions - silken-red aura, sparkling white pearls, poise of ruby rose… hugs ~ Kim Vijay Pandit August 27, 2022 at 7:29 AM Thank you Kim. Much appreciate your visit and comments.