Ruby Rose

Sparkling white pearls in sun-rays gold Adorning dew drops glint-morning arose On silken-red aura, petals velvet unfold Flaunting glamour of expressions bold Exuding fragrance floral splendor chose Luring passions heart rhythms compose Revealing hints endearing sights disclose In language of love, poise of ruby rose. August 26, 2022 Eight Lines of Rhyme-Your Favorite Flower Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/21/2023 11:23:00 PM

Dear vijay, you are just a natural with your way of rhymes and flow of alliterations and such exquisite wordplay. I love how descriptive it is and so many lines stood out for me in this like “ On silken-red aura, petals velvet unfold Flaunting glamour of expressions bold“ gorgeous and captivating cadence really. “ In language of love, poise of ruby rose.“ just stunning! You are so gifted. Always a pleasure reading your work. Sending you light .

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/30/2023 10:46:00 AM

Splendidly sensuous and lovely, Vijay. This is a fave. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2022 11:58:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/5/2022 5:59:00 PM

This is so lovely Vijay. Harry

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2022 6:28:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win Vijay! I liked it the first time, and even more on the second read. :) Linda

Bill Baker

Date: 8/31/2022 1:16:00 PM

A beauty for the contest, Vijay. Good luck my friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/3/2022 7:49:00 AM

Thank you my good friend. You are always so kind.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2022 9:44:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/3/2022 7:49:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate, as always.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/28/2022 8:20:00 PM

Lovely Vijay. Unique and well written. I have read two magnificent poems from you today. Your level of creativity is at the very top my friend. God bless you...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/3/2022 7:48:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Michael.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/28/2022 9:42:00 AM

"...silken red aura..." does it for me Vijay. Just lovely in every way! Linda

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2022 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Linda--much appreciate.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/28/2022 6:57:00 AM

Vijay, I can smell them fragrance from here and visualize the beauty of the Ruby Rose you have created in this lovely tribute ! Love it . Now I need to adorn my table with some of these beauties ! Best of luck in the contest . Hugs, Susan :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2022 2:32:00 PM

Many thanks for your visit and comments, Susan. Much appreciate, as always.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/28/2022 4:50:00 AM

A fabulous portrait of a rose painted by the brushes of your poetic inspiration, my dearest friend, Vijay! Blessings!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2022 2:32:00 PM

So nice to hear that. Much appreciate, my friend. Many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/27/2022 7:02:00 PM

Your words exalt the rose to the Queen she is Vijay. This is so lovely. I lope it is a top winner in the contest. It is a fave for me. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2022 2:31:00 PM

Always a joy to read your kind remarks and your poems. Many thanks for your visit and comments, Connie. And special thanks for the FAVE.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/27/2022 3:34:00 PM

Vijay, your poem is like a ruby rose, dazzling in its beauty and filling the air with its fragrance! And the verses about the favorite flower shine like dew drops or white pearls caught in the golden rays of the sun. Best for a win dear friend

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2022 2:30:00 PM

Much appreciate, as always, your detailed insights my friend. Many thanks, Lasaad.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2022 3:02:00 PM

I do love that ruby rose.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2022 2:29:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/27/2022 6:56:00 AM

Your words on your favorite flower sparkle just like the "dew drops that sparkle in golden rays of sun like white pearls"..Vijayji.. Best wishes in the contest... God bless... ~ Ani

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2022 7:32:00 AM

Glad you stopped by with your cheerful remarks, Ani. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/27/2022 6:37:00 AM

The rose will always be the symbol of love. Loved the monorhyme.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2022 7:32:00 AM

You right about rose being the symbol of love. Much appreciate, Victor. Many thanks.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/26/2022 9:11:00 PM

Love the imagery Vijay. Blessings my friend...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2022 7:31:00 AM

Glad you liked the poem, Michael. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/26/2022 8:41:00 PM

"dew drops on silken-red aura petals." A beautiful image to behold indeed. Simply breathtaking. Your thoughts caress the page with such elegance and grace. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2022 7:30:00 AM

Thank you my friend. I see your smile. Much appreciate, as always, Brandy. Many thanks.