Russell Sivey Poet Dodoitsu

Ruby Red

A ruby that’s red with fire
Brought about sweet love’s desire
There’s no other that’s higher
Sweet ruby red fire

Russell Sivey

My birthstone for July is a ruby!

Entrant into Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver's "~ Flowers or Stones ~" contest

1/13/2012

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 21, 2012 at 9:21 PM congrats Russell on a stupendous win for this exciting write on ruby red .. luv that stone after my emerald one..thankxx for all your kind comments.. trying to catch up but hubby gets tired so fast from working hard all day.. he is my gem..

Nette Onclaud January 20, 2012 at 2:28 AM red-hott congrats , russell!.... love this and huggs!

Andrea Dietrich January 19, 2012 at 9:34 PM Are you Cancer, Russell, like my hubbie is? SWEET poem and sweet win. Congrats.

Bob Quigley January 19, 2012 at 8:37 AM Congratulations on your win Russell. Well done

Carol Sunshine Brown January 19, 2012 at 7:45 AM Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Debra Squyres January 19, 2012 at 6:25 AM And a ruby of a poem you've written !! Enjoyed !! Congrats on your placement in the Contest !!

Charlotte Puddifoot January 18, 2012 at 2:13 PM the red fire of the ruby sparks from this passionate dodoitsu...thanks for your inspiring comments :-)

Gwendolen Song January 18, 2012 at 9:13 AM You used the dodoitso form to write a very nice gem!! Nothing speaks passion like the ruby...enjoyed and hey! good luck in the contest. Gwendolen

Don Johnson January 17, 2012 at 7:16 PM guess this one brought on the fire poem hey...

Don Johnson January 14, 2012 at 1:22 AM love it Russell, very very bloody good, wish that i could write like, could:)

Robert Pettit January 13, 2012 at 10:52 PM From the title, one may initially suspect you were describing grapefruit here. This dodoitsu is a nice way to describe a ruby.

Elizabeth Wesley January 13, 2012 at 9:52 PM My birthstone for July Russ, It's just as you describe and they sure are my favorite stone!